New kissme

[fallenemokissme]

I am writing my first fanfiction and would like some help. To see if it is good or not and if I should keep writing. I am a writer but poetry is my strong point, I am good at short stories. I would more or less make this a type of book setting. So, if anyone would like to help I would be very grateful.
Oh, I am Noel from the US.