i'll never ask for anyone but you
dear mine
yunho&jaejoong
pg, romance
based on jyj concert
(♥) for my bby am3thyst
( until we meet again someday )
yunho&jaejoong
pg, romance
based on jyj concert
(♥) for my bby am3thyst
( until we meet again someday )
OMGOMGOMGOMG, bb I still can't believe this awesome piece is written for me *HUGHUGHUG*!!! Heehee, i love the layout, especially the graphics used for the section breaks. The lyrics for W, the YouTube video in the beginning are u trying to kill me??! ...ugh, Sheryl this hurts so good. ;______;
Just a fan. And like the rest of them, he’d come to listen.
To remember what it felt like to hear Jaejoong sing two hundred feet away from him and no further.
Now I totally know what you mean when you said I read your mind - I think it's sweet that they're each other's biggest fans, despite being so talented and awesome themselves. And to think that Yunho came to the JYJ concert as a quiet fan to hear Jaejoong sing...this is just so bittersweet. I always love fics when one of them isn't just DBSK's leader or lead sing, but Jaejoong and Yunho fans. This totally happened in real life, I refuse to believe it otherwise. T____T
He looks up in pure reflex, and so does Jaejoong, who seemed to have been caught off-guard.
OMG, you wrote about the incident!!!! I was totally hoping someone would write about that and now it's YOUR turn to read my mind! =DDD
I REALLY like this line because they seem to be so mentally connected. they're just meant to be like that ufufuffu I was so surprised when Jaejoong actually heard the fanboy shouting Yunho's name, and how he just perks up and goes like "eh?" This reminds me of your 'Voix' fic in which they can still communicated without using words.
He smiles endearingly, the way people do when they’re in love and won’t admit it.
Ugh, this line breaks my heart and then puts it back together with honey or something sweet like that ;___;. They're so ridiculously in love with each other seriously, especially how obvious Jaejoong gets whenever anything Yunho related is mentioned or brought up. He sometimes tries to hide it, but when his reaction is just so natural.
And GUH, their dialogue afterwards is just...GUH. I love this new style of yours Sheryl. Your YunJae is minimalist but so intense and sweet - so much words are left unspoken, and so much emotions are in between the lines. Not gonna lie, when Yunho appeared, my heart started beating fast, too.
‘I searched every bar I could find,’ Yunho says by way of explanation, stepping out from the shadows with his hands in his pockets.
‘Stalker,’ Jaejoong accuses good-naturedly, unable to hide the rush of emotions, the chest-hammering.
I love their subtle flirtation here, but this is just SOSOSO sad that Yunho have to search every bar before he finds Jaejoong. D: In the past, he would automatically know where Jaejoong is because they freakin' live together and would never have to do that.
Yunho smirks. ‘I knew you’d say that’ he replies jokingly, latching an arm around his shoulder. ‘I came to walk you home.’
Robbed of speech, Jaejoong simply nodded.
It was stupid, but despite the fact that they were going in a straight line, he couldn’t take his eyes off the other man.
Awww Yunho - so romantic and a little dorky and such a good boyfriend. You definitely didn't have to worry about guessing what they'd say to each other b/c this is how I imagine they'll interact with each other as well - Yunho being a dorky romantic where his actions speak louder than his words and Jaejoong being a little indignant and lightly bantering with Yunho but being not-so-secretly pleased. And the last line...they're just so lovestruck with each other it hurts so good.
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They reach a flight of lower stairs. Jaejoong hops on the railing, holding onto Yunho’s hand for balance as he mimics the tightrope.
Now it's Jaejoong's turn to be a dork - I love how this reminds me of the picture in Bonjour Paris where Jaejoong was walked on...something and Yunho was holding this hand. Again, their subtle gestures already speak a thousand words.
Is it singing or being on stage with you that I want?
I started tearing up here ;___; because we all know how Jaejoong lives and breathes for singing, so equating these two things together shows he much he misses his man. And of course, this line brings me back memories of OT5 and yeah, you get the point. And I love their flirty banter afterwards ‘I buy your cds,’ oh Yunnie you big dork. *pinches his cheeks and shoves him into Jaejoong's apartment*
He would have asked him to stay. Would have pleaded. But he couldn’t have him any longer than the time it took for him to find his own bearing.
It breaks my heart how their time spent together is always so short and there's always the inevitable 'goodbye.; And Jaejoong here...wanting Yunho to stay yet knowing that'll just cause trouble to both of them. I would have pleaded Yunnie to stay, too. Angst Yunjae calls for fluffy implied Yunjae sexytimes XDD
He risks one final look at the expense of his heart.
‘We'll meet again someday,’ he promises;
The farthest words from goodbye...
Keep in mind that I love you.
Amazing how you managed to describe their current situation with just four lines. At the expense of his heart...you totally described Yunho's feelings perfectly there. He knows it's bad to see Jaejoong b/c he'll just miss him more, yet he cannot help but to do it. Yes, they'll meet again someday...
I just wanna say this fic is everything I'd wanted and then some, and I'm so sorry for my late response in telling you that. I love how you seamlessly transition from subtle angst to fluff - from their flirty banter to just how much they miss each other. No over the top dialogue (and that's REALLY hard to do in these fics), and you convey their emotions so well with so few words. And GUH, the last four lines give me so much hope and mends my broken heart - despite that no one wants the current situation, it's still not goodbye. Thanks for once again giving me hope.
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