As a fan of both Atlantis and Enterprise, and a rabid McShepper, I have to say that you lost me at "poor trusting Vulcans," but it looks like it was probably fun to write. :)
Okay, I don't really know what you mean by that. I was trying to imply that Becket was creating a virus to rob the vulcans of their ability to control their emotions, not that they are particularly trusting in general. But thanks for reading anyhow!
FANTASTIC!yinkawillsSeptember 28 2008, 23:06:29 UTC
Original! Well drawn characters! Intriguing Plot! I started off slightly confused, and wondering where you were going, but rapidly got hooked. By the time I came to the end, I felt it was much too short!
Loved this characterisation of Sheppard.The charm and the deadliness. It draws on the one we saw in 'Miller's Crossing'-the Shepard who could manipulate a man into feeding himself to a Wraith.And the 'Special-Ops' Sheppard we've seen in episodes like 'The Storm'. Yours is a more human version of the Black-Ops, psychopathic Sheppard of Seperis' brilliant 'Crimes Against Humanity' series.
Loved your Teyla and how the Wraith dna affects her standing amongst Betazoids. Ronon as a Klingon was a brilliant idea.. I'd love to read more set in this 'verse. And to see more of the McShep relationship, including when they clash.Long to see your versions of Zelenka and Lorne.
Thank you! I really like a darker look at Sheppard too. The guy who will do anything for the right cause is a lot scarier than a guy who just wants to do bad, in my opinion.
I had wanted to do more Teyla/Michael stuff, but I think it would be cool to do something about Rodney's independence from John too, now that you bring it up. Actually, I'm wondering what Doranda might look like in this 'verse. Hmmm.
That was fun! I have a weakness for assassin!sheppard, but the bit that made the orlds click together perfectly was Ford noticing the doll in the Wraith-fodder child's arms. Elizabeth would rule Stargate, and Sheppard - ah, lots of nice touches!
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I started off slightly confused, and wondering where you were going, but rapidly got hooked.
By the time I came to the end, I felt it was much too short!
Loved this characterisation of Sheppard.The charm and the deadliness. It draws on the one we saw in 'Miller's Crossing'-the Shepard who could manipulate a man into feeding himself to a Wraith.And the 'Special-Ops' Sheppard we've seen in episodes like 'The Storm'. Yours is a more human version of the Black-Ops, psychopathic Sheppard of Seperis' brilliant 'Crimes Against Humanity' series.
Loved your Teyla and how the Wraith dna affects her standing amongst Betazoids. Ronon as a Klingon was a brilliant idea..
I'd love to read more set in this 'verse. And to see more of the McShep relationship, including when they clash.Long to see your versions of Zelenka and Lorne.
Hurry up and WRITE! :D:D:D
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I had wanted to do more Teyla/Michael stuff, but I think it would be cool to do something about Rodney's independence from John too, now that you bring it up. Actually, I'm wondering what Doranda might look like in this 'verse. Hmmm.
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