John in labor!

Oct 29, 2009 15:29

Title: Transferred
Author: Tzzzz
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: mpreg, medical grossness
Parings: John/Rodney, John/Cam
Spoilers: The Ark, Outcast
Beta: dossier
Summary: John's labor. Follows Tables Turned, Once There Was a Man Named Holland, Not a Henry, The Kangaroos and the Bees, What Rodney Wants, Conception and The Good of the One

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mecurtin October 30 2009, 02:22:29 UTC
Well, it's a fine mess you've got there. *admires* If you kill Rodney with an exploding tumor I will be seriously ticked, btw.

I assume "Henry" is for The Eighth, the patron saint of 100% straight guys?

nit: you refer at least once to "Pasture" rupture when I assume you meant "Pasteur".

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tzzzz October 30 2009, 02:28:22 UTC
Thank you! I think Rodney is safe. Don't worry. And Henry is for Henry the Eighth, a guy so straight he started a new religion ;-) Thanks for the nitpick. I fixed it.

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syble4 October 30 2009, 02:57:49 UTC
I was just looking yesterday to see if you'd posted the next story. :D Runs off to read it!!

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shadowserenity October 30 2009, 02:58:11 UTC
While I like Cam very much at the end of the story (helping John, being the stable force), I still feel for Rodney in that infirmary conversation. I'm sorry that he didn't attend the birth, although labor sickness didn't exactly put John at his best.

Nevertheless, this is a credit to you for making me feel so much for these characters! :)

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tzzzz October 30 2009, 04:11:03 UTC
Thank you! I feel for Rodney a lot too, but I don't know how I would've written him attending the transfer. Also, I'm happy you are really feeling for the characters!

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tzzzz October 30 2009, 04:09:44 UTC
Thank you! So happy you are enjoying the 'verse and the love triangle.

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syble4 October 30 2009, 03:55:42 UTC
Ah, Cam and John are so cute together, but I feel so sorry for Rodney. He has to be so hurt. What a predicament you have John in. The transfer was nicely done and came across very sweet.

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tzzzz October 30 2009, 04:09:01 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, somehow John/Cam turned into the sweet cute couple while John and Rodney have all the angst, but Rodney will get his eventually.

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