OMG...how heart wrenching and yet beautiful at the same time. I cried at the end, thinking of how poetic this story was. This one can tear at ya and hold you in your place through the whole piece. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story.
This one definitely rips your heart out. Jimmy and Lou are written beautifully and you feel the difficulty in which Jimmy leaves and Lou watches him go. Beautiful.
Great story RayewendymypoohJuly 28 2008, 04:46:40 UTC
What a heartwrenching story. Lou hating the the thought of losing Jimmy like she lost Kid, and Jimmy torn abotu fulfilling his duties and staying with the woman he loved...
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