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[Sky High] - "To Worship the Sun" {Warren/Magenta}

Apr 10, 2006 12:53

Title: To Worship the Sun
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: I wish.
Fandom: Sky High
Pairing: Warren/Magenta
Theme set: Alpha
Rating: G - R
Word count: 5,600
Summary: 50 sentences, one pairing.
Crossposted: 1sentence, skyhighfic, fanfiction.net.
Notes: Ordinary sentences somehow turned into run-on ones, and I apologize for that. Many of these tie in with my previous Sky High fic ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, genre: het, challenge: 1sentence, fandom: sky high, genre: fic, rating: g, rating: r, rating: pg

Comments 4

yesthatnagia July 23 2006, 05:58:06 UTC

Ohmigod, choose ONE favourite? I'm not sure I CAN! They were all brilliant. I guess maybe 16....

resmin December 7 2006, 16:15:14 UTC

I just recently saw the movie and came upon your writing. This is absolutely breathtaking. Not on the writing itself, but the concept. The way that you flow the sentences together. Amazing.

solitude_regret April 6 2007, 09:00:28 UTC

These are gorgeous, I don't even have words... your writing style is amazing.

liquidlights August 3 2007, 04:27:34 UTC

I reviewed this on FF.NET as KathrynAv, but I would like to give a more detailed review...so here I am.

I can't get over how wonderful this is. I just re-read it again last night and it gave me chills. It's perfect...all of it. You captured the potentional of their relationship so well.

My Favorites:

Blood: It shows passion -- something deeper than I could ever see her have with Zach.

Innocence: I commend you for coming up with this. It blew my mind. It makes me see (even more) how perfect they are (could be) for each other.

Gift: This was just beautiful. Especially "Magenta knows that the greatest gift she could ever give him is the opportunity to prove his fears wrong." ...Just beautiful.

Sun: I love how you tied in the Greeks. You really show how she sacrificed herself (her heart and being) to feel Warren's love. Also-- "...the heat and flames and light form a vacuum strong enough to kill and give birth and turn things into nothingness" <-- I never thought of the sun like that...but it's so unbelievably true.

Lightning/ ( ... )