[Heroes] - "Welcoming the Burn" {Mohinder/Claire}

[typings]

Title: Welcoming the Burn
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: I wish
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Claire
Theme set: Epsilon
Rating: G-R
Word count: 7,300
Summary: 50 sentences, one pairing.
Crossposted: typings, heroes_fic, 1sentence, claire_mohinder, fanfiction.net.
Notes: For the 1sentence challenge. Unbeta'd. Like the last time I tried this, ordinary sentences somehow turned into run-on ones, and I

Comments

[fool_of_ships]

So if I have to play favorites... *head goes asplodey* "Command" made me giggle, and "Goodbye" literally had me sitting drop-jawed focusing on remembering to breathe. But it comes down to "Thousand," for the sweeping backdrop painted with one microcosm of determination; and "God," for depicting Mohinder so neatly in both diction and structure.

Just...wow.

[pcdarkrose]

Im in awe. Your writing style is so beautiful.

You are so creative

[anonymous]

I love your stories, and this one reaches a new level. I printed it out so I could cut up the sentences and read them in different ways. As for my favorite sentence - I love #12, because it's a story - an ADVENTURE story! - all in one sentence. And #30 for its clever and loving ending. If you haven't read "The Time Traveler's Wife" you are a genius. If you have read it, you've borrowed in the best possible way.

You are very, very talented.

Re: You are so creative

[kenzimone]

Thank you! I actually haven't read the book, but I checked it out and think that it might be something I'd like. Thanks for the tip!

[nurse_stiney]

After re-reading this, I think I can finally pick out some favorites. ;) Before, all I could think is that I loved them ALL