i love this. you have reinstated my faith in fan-written fiction, single-handedly. i cannot remember the last time i had such genuine adoration for a fic. perfect, absolutely sensual and vivid and so satisfyingly descriptive without being florid; yes, best ever. i am in heaven over your writing, vintage_belle! it's like when i was young, skipping to the lavish sex scenes in classic novels - how stimulating, on more than a base level.
raves, etc. the harem is perhaps the most shockingly evil, yet enticing arrangement i've come across. and your hybrid is every exotic fantasy of it, without the tawdry explicating. in any case, i am pretty hurt and depressed over maru being reduced to a eunuch (that's not politically correct, is it?), but since you made satoshi emperor, i guess all is forgiven between us (you: who are you?)
Thank you very much! I was very much hesitant to write this as a harem AU because I worried about what would come of it - harems can be written so badly so easily. If nothing else I was hoping that the porn would be satisfying, but I'm so glad to hear that the rest of the world blended well!
Somebody was going to have to be reduced to eunuch status (and there was no other choice for Chief Eunuch other than Leader). It's not meant to be a slur against Maru - Kanjani's my second favorite JE group. Besides, the eunuchs are also the ones who protect the harem-boys/girls, and keep order within the harem. It's not like Maru has no position whatsoever.
(nods thoughtfully) yes, everything you said about eunuchs is true, yes indeed. yet still, i think a certain doe-eyed newscaster would have made - wait, no, this is a fiction, not real life.
i jest, poorly. i am not familiar with your other fic (. . . i don't get out much in the fandom, apparently), so i'll be popping around and reading some more soon. you're quite excellent.
The thing about him, is that he already has a position. It just wasn't important for this particular 'fic, so he didn't merit a mention. He was there in the audience chamber with the Emperor though.
I don't think I'm a big name, so it doesn't surprise me that you wouldn't know me. XD; But. My other 'fic is (hopefully) nothing like this one, so I hope you'll like it anyway.
You... you have a way with creating universes that are believable and almost tangible. The details on the clothes, the customs, the personalities, the mood of the scenes. You have written them SO WELL. I am in awe. Everything was exquisitely described. Wonderful.
It probably helps me to detail when I have to create the world entirely. XD; When I write non-AU I skip the detailing because I figure everyone can guess based on dramas. Although this time I had a LOT of help from research - I wanted to write a proper harem, not something out of a twenties movie.
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I was just about to sleep.... How can i now?! I hold you responsible for this XD
I really like the fact that Ohno is the one with the power and of course your virgin Nino....... *cough*
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Thank you. ♥
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raves, etc. the harem is perhaps the most shockingly evil, yet enticing arrangement i've come across. and your hybrid is every exotic fantasy of it, without the tawdry explicating. in any case, i am pretty hurt and depressed over maru being reduced to a eunuch (that's not politically correct, is it?), but since you made satoshi emperor, i guess all is forgiven between us (you: who are you?)
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Somebody was going to have to be reduced to eunuch status (and there was no other choice for Chief Eunuch other than Leader). It's not meant to be a slur against Maru - Kanjani's my second favorite JE group. Besides, the eunuchs are also the ones who protect the harem-boys/girls, and keep order within the harem. It's not like Maru has no position whatsoever.
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i jest, poorly. i am not familiar with your other fic (. . . i don't get out much in the fandom, apparently), so i'll be popping around and reading some more soon. you're quite excellent.
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I don't think I'm a big name, so it doesn't surprise me that you wouldn't know me. XD; But. My other 'fic is (hopefully) nothing like this one, so I hope you'll like it anyway.
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You... you have a way with creating universes that are believable and almost tangible. The details on the clothes, the customs, the personalities, the mood of the scenes. You have written them SO WELL. I am in awe.
Everything was exquisitely described. Wonderful.
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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 8D
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