The Azure

[tygati]

*grin* The fluffy story. ^^ One-shot. Many thankies to M for the encouragings. ^^;

No pictures. Maybe later. >.> It is later. Am off to play more KH and ponder another idea as M has prodded me. ;) Heh.

Comments

[mechante_fille]

"Oh yes," indeed!!! Kitty! That was loverly!! Sooo, sweet and fluffy and interesting, too! You could do more with this world, you know. Maybe Lan needs someone, hm? Oh, he had a brogue, btw. From the moment he opened his mouth it came out heavy Scottish. Nae had a very slight, more Irishy lilt.

Okay! Now to sit patiently and wait for Lan's story, and for the picture story, which I know you can do! You know, I think the only reason for having ears that long is if they are erogenous zones. Yup.

[stardance]

I am of the firm belief that his fins are, too. Especially if he has a dorsal fin.

[tygati]

Quite probable. ^^; The boys will probably see if it's possible to have sex with a merman while in the water at some point... ;)

[tygati]

*giggle* Yes, there is much that could be done with that world. Later, though. ^^; And Scottish? Okay. ^^ I knew he had an accent. Didn't know from where. ;)

Picture is Here. Lan's story, eh, maybe someday. New story? In the works. ^^

Haha, Nae's ears aren't overly long, but they have double-points cause they're fishy-shaped. *nod* And ears are always an erogenous zone. ;) I say so.

[tygati]

*glomp* Of course he was. Checking numbers. *nod* I bet he had to re-check those things an awful lot... ;)

*dies laughing* What a splendid description of Nae. It is so fitting. ^^

*glompie* Yes, yes, working on it. Minx. ;)

*is puddle of happy, happy goo*

[skylark97]

*_________________________________* Ahhhhh!!!! I love Nae, and I love the slow, gradual way that you drop hints that he's a merman before confirming it. *tackle glomps*

I absoultely adore the Azure and how you created it and Torhle's intention to be a crew member on it and Nae's finding him like that and just signing him on out of the blue. I also love the camradarie between the three of them.

And the scene where Torhle wakes up and asks about Nae's tail? *hearts* Oh, that was just perfect. *_____*

And Torhle was just adorable. ^___________________^!!!

*twirls you about* Damn, you're good at this. *tackle glomps* Eieeeeeeeeeee!!!!! ^____________________________________^!!

Re: *is puddle of happy, happy goo*

[tygati]

It is insanely hard to keep a merman a sekkrit in a story you've working-titled 'merman' ^^;;

Nae, as M put it, is batshit loco. ^.~ Odd things happen around him, and around the Azure by extension. ^____^ Poor Torhle.

Hehe. My lousy little angstangstOKAYWE'REGOOD! moment. ;)

*purrglomp* Domo! ^^ Now, if only we could inspire you into writing stuffies as well.... perhaps a certain boy... with horns and hooves? *halo*

[naatz]

Eee! Fantastic! Great character development, even for this length! Nae is simply hilarious. Funny how he spends as much time in the 'air' as he does in the water. :)

The foreshadowing is very well-done. The language is captivating. So are the characters.

I had lots of fun reading this. Thanks for posting. :D

|Meduza|

[tygati]

^_____^ Thankie. Am very glad my silly little bits of fluff bring enjoyment to peoples.

[sashalmiller]

::splutters:: DAMN YOU LJ FOR EATING MY COMMENT. ERG.

Take two, I suppose. I'm so copying this before submitting though, I HATE redoing comments because I always forget things.

anyway. ::GLOMPS:: I love it. ^___^ I think it's one of my favorites so far. Just sea, and mermen and bits and skirts and sailing and the ship sounds so pretty and so does Naefindan, and i love the swimming at the end.

Heh, so what's next? A story of the eastern dragons? ^____^

::laughs:: And crap, I think I'm forgetting something again, and I hate that, but IT WAS WONDERFUL. Lovely, and loved, and I love it. ^___^;; Just, yes, you're not allowed to get a job or anything becuase you must keep with the writing. ::nods:: ♥♥♥♥

[tygati]

LJ loves to eat comments. It gets sadistic pleasure from doing so. >.>;

*grin* Nae is crazy psycho merman love, yus.

*laugh* No, no, next is Arabia. ;)

^^;;; But if I do not get a job then I will not be able to afford rent and stuffies so I must get a job but I will attempt to still write as well. My muses are so loud at this point that I'm not sure I could stop if I wanted to. >.>;;

[sashalmiller]

::nods:: It so does.

SO VERY YES. ^___^ meloves.

You should do dragons though. You LOVE dragons. You bounce for dragons. ::grin:: And just imagine the fun you could have with them. Flames and teeth and wings and silly adventurers that wander into their lairs...

Haha, well, that's good news for the rest of us? ^____^

[tygati]

Haha, well, Dragons are on the list of Things To Attempt, but I have absolutely zero control over my muses. >.>; Darkness and its sequels weren't even on the freaking radar and they just jumped up and said Write Me. x.x;;

:P Brat. ^^