fic: The Weakness In Me (?/Yoann Gourcuff, PG)

[txorakeriak]

Title: The Weakness In Me
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, French National Team
Pairing: ?/Yoann Gourcuff
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen the way I wrote it. No payment involved, no offence

Comments

[_runningmascara]

i personally don't like first person pov because it usually feels disjointed and awkward. this however is written beautifully especially with the hidden identity of the narrator. i love how you described the situation and most of all yoann and his reaction to all this.

it's a touchy subject but thank you for writing it.

[txorakeriak]

I agree, I don't usually like first-person fic either because the danger of putting too much of yourself into the characters is too great, but in this case it wouldn't have worked because I needed to keep the identity of the narrator a secret for lack of information. I didn't want to point fingers at anyone when I didn't know for sure that they were involved.

The subject is not one of my favourites and I prefer writing happier fic, but I just couldn't get Yoann out of my head. Glad you liked the story, and thanks for commenting!

[_runningmascara]

i like that you wrote about the subject and that you didn't sugarcoat it (though of course we don't know the full details). and yes yoann he's to be written a lot more. i am trying to myself :)

[txorakeriak]

To be honest I don't think there was anything to sugarcoat - mobbing is a serious business, I've experienced my fair share of it, and I wouldn't wish it on anyone. The least I could do was to give Yoann a friend.

I agree, he needs more fic! Good luck! Can't wait to read it! :)

[_runningmascara]

well i mean some wouldn't have written about it or skimmed over it and i appreciate that you didn't :)