Laern tu spel cheeck.
This following one I suppose is generally alright besides a few things. One, enough spelling errors that if you actually re-read what you wrote, you could have found them easily. Second, I don't think pistols are in WoW. This isn't cowboys and aliens... Aliens, yes, cowboys not so much. In that, I suppose, you are assuming the stereotypical cowboy character. Vigilantes? Perhaps. Cowboys in their iconic sense. No. So please, understand what connotation is. Actually, a third pet peeve. With all those weapons, you must make a jingly noise. Unless they are magically so small and so hidden that you cannot hear them as you move. I bet a wizard did it, too. 
Edit: I forgot about his background. It's even cooler if you don't say anything that could fascillitate RP, but instead put quotations! But no theme songs? I am stunned. Oh wait. The last one. Is that... oh, no. It's a a song lyric! Korn - Get Up. Really cool, buddy. And please, flip your emo bang you monster.
Edit: I forgot about his background. It's even cooler if you don't say anything that could fascillitate RP, but instead put quotations! But no theme songs? I am stunned. Oh wait. The last one. Is that... oh, no. It's a a song lyric! Korn - Get Up. Really cool, buddy. And please, flip your emo bang you monster.