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Dec 26, 2009 11:39

Title: All The Best Stories Start With A Death
Author: phaetonschariot
Recipient: cruentum
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG-13, mild violence
Summary: Certain things just don't go together, like ice cream and ketchup, like Torchwood and parenting.

( Jack inhaled sharply, oxygen flooding lungs gone lousy with CO2, and realised that he was was no longer lying on concrete. )

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Comments 23

nancybrown December 25 2009, 22:50:01 UTC

Great job, anon! I like the ambiguity of how best to raise an alien baby. Also, I LOL'd at the beginning. :)

lefaym December 25 2009, 22:58:34 UTC

Awwww... oh man, this is lovely.

beesandbrews December 25 2009, 23:04:33 UTC

Hey, look at that! Parent!fic that's not all ew and treacle.

blue_fjords December 25 2009, 23:08:33 UTC

Aww! *smoosh* That's sweet w/out sap! And a great line for a Nick fic:

he felt fairly sure that his intestines were safely back where they belong, curled up behind his abdominal muscles like a sleeping cat.

Awesome imagery!

electro_club December 25 2009, 23:49:32 UTC

This is really sweet, anon. I figured cruentum would be getting toddler fic, and I was so looking forward to this. It's a complicated subject to write when it comes to those two, but I think you did it just right. I loved the conversation at the end, and and... everything.

It was too, too sweet, anon. :)