When You Grow Up Your Heart Dies 20/20

May 24, 2012 20:29



Fandom: Inception x Dark!Breakfast Club

Pairing(s): Arthur/Eames, Cobb/Mal

Length: 65,016 words

Summary: They went into detention with nothing in common. They witnessed something frightening that may or may not have actually happened: a dead body and blood on the walls spelling 528491. Can a nerd, a jock, a criminal, a pampered prince, and basket case ( Read more... )

slash, hetero, "breakfast club", complete, inception, arthur/eames, inception_kink, au, fanfiction, cobb/mal

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twowritehands June 14 2012, 20:06:09 UTC
Wow thanks for reading and writing such a lovely review! (the longer the fic, the better a longer review is!)

I'm glad you liked Eames' parents. I was going for realistic dynamics. And Arthur's too. I hope you picked up on how they aren't bad people, just not great parents? Anyway, the breakfast club is Arthur's family now.

As for Ari/Saito...This pairing strangely captivated me. And once again, I went for realistic. Since we know Dom and Mal end up together, and we hope Arthur and Eames stay together forever, I didn't want a third happily-ever-after. I put her with Robert so they can eventually breakup...that sounds terrible, I know. HOpefully you get what I'm talking about though. Anyway, I have inklings for a Rom/Com sequeal about Ari and Saito falling in love in their mid-thirties or something. Both too emotionally stunted/wounded to realize their best friend is their soul mate. One of those "Just friends" situations where one of them suddenly sees the other as a sexual being after all this time and things get whacky. Very "When Harry Met Sally" I guess. lol

I know what you mean about the dark parts too. I ordinarily stay away from all dark fics. But I couldn't refuse the oppurtunity to make Dom the princess and Mal the criminal while Arthur was Eames' basketcase. heehee :P

Thanks again for putting a whole day into reading my story! I am glad you feel it was worth your time. This review certainly helps me feel like the time I put into it was worth it :D

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