065 - Fortune Teller

Nov 11, 2010 16:49

Fortune Teller

Synopsis: Jenny utilizes the Coven to learn more about her past. To do so, she must call upon Angel for help, and together they go into his memories and revisit when he was cursed with a soul. In the process, Jenny learns a lot more than she bargained for.

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065 - fortune teller, season: 6, rating: pg-13, !original

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calendar_woman November 13 2010, 22:50:38 UTC
Seriously, this whole chapter, especially coupled with the previous, was full of so much win it’s almost not fair to any and all other writers in the whole of fanfic. You basically just bitch-slapped Joss for a job not done. Awwwww! Hehehe, you are way too sweet for words. I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter, even though a lot of it centered around Jenny and Angel. I was really looking forward to finally getting this one out - I feel like it's been in my back pocket for ages.

The sexiness that is J/G post-sex is quite a lovely read. Even the second time around, that was astonishingly butterfly inducing. Hehehe, why thank you! I got those pretty images in my head and HAD to share them. I figured you guys wouldn't mind. ;) (Also, LOL at your Jenny/panties comment. I could so see her doing that, just as a joke -- howling and cat-calling Giles, throwing spare undies at him while he rolls his eyes, but secretly loves it! HEE.)

Her roots grow deep with him… or is it the other way around! Badump-chhhhhhh XD Yes, folks… I’ll be here all week. Don’t forget to tip your waitress! BAHAHAHA. WIN.

LOLOLOLOL at the remark Jenny makes about Angel’s Irish accent. HAHA, glad you liked that! There was no way I COULDN'T address that godawful accent. Oh, DB. So hot. So, SO bad at accents.

I can only imagine how stunning she must appear, looking like Jenny, wearing a gypsy gown. HEEEE! As I mentioned on Twitter, I am SO glad we all seem to agree that Robia would own the hell out of a gypsy ensemble. That'd take 'gorgeous' into the stratosphere.

Secondly, as I mentioned to you before, you had an open door to go SMUT CRAZY with Angelus and Serena. While it would have actually fit quite well, I could only imagine Giles’ reaction to watching it. And trust me, I dialed it back A LOT. When I was originally planning this piece, I wasn't going to have Giles looking in on it -- it was just gonna be Jenny and Angel. If I would've kept it like that, there would've definitely been smut. But, I figured it'd be kind of weird with not only Giles, but Vivian too, essentially peeking in on those memories. LOL voyeurism doesn't seem like Giles' thing. :P And, like you said, that would fill in the blanks for him in a very traumatizing way, poor guy.

OMG Enyos!! Where do you come up with this stuff, seriously!!!! He’s a wizard! And he was Serena’s father! GAH! That, honestly, was semi-last-minute. I was trying to figure out how to handle the whole curse aspect -- I'd essentially have to invent a whole 'nother new character. Then I just got this interesting little thought, like, "Heh, what if Enyos did it?" because that could explain why he was on Jenny's case so much -- so, BOOM. Sorcerer. Glad you liked that bit. :)

How awesome could it have been if she didn’t die, and if she would have been around while Jenny was alive - Jenny’s vampire doppelganger. GAH! So cool! That would've been SO awesome. I think I even mentioned in an above response that I would've LOVED it if Angelus had just 'turned' Jenny. That would've added a whole new level of angst and hotness. Because you'd have Giles/Jenny, who would essentially be the grown-up version of Buffy/Angel then, plus Angelus/Jenny who could've done all kinds of sexy badass things without their souls. GAAAAHHHH WHY DIDN'T THIS REALLY HAPPEN, JOSS. What a bitch he is, seriously.

He has the misplaced passion for Serena and yet he can’t have Jenny. It’s like eternal torture for him. :-( Heee, precisely. So, there'll always be a little something between him and Jenny, but nothing can ever happen. :D

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