The Coven Synopsis: Jenny begins her association with the Coven in Westbury, discovering her 'Five Elements' as well as learning a couple new tricks. When she and Giles cast an inner eye on Sunnydale and find out what Willow's been up to, she becomes more determined than ever to stop her before she goes too far.
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Alright, so… I really like the mood that we get from Giles and Jenny in England. I know they are very worried about the kids back in Sunnydale, but they are so much more calm in England. It’s so cute. I really like the beginning of the chapter where after showering and preparing for the morning, Giles goes out onto the terrace to play his guitar. I love this man and his guitar playing. He seriously can’t get any more amazing. Jenny is one lucky woman.
When you had Jenny make breakfast for them, I was so hoping that she would have something to tell him. This is yet another thing I am excited for. Little Gileslets and Jennylets? Yes. They would be so epically cute. <333
The ‘got laid last night’ glow? Epic. Again, I love these two. That made me laugh harder than it should have.
As I mentioned on Twitter, and feel I must mention again, when you mention Miss Harkness, I either see Captain Jack Harkness in a dress OR wonder how long Miss Harkness has been keeping Jack in her back room. I know I would keep him in my back room. Just sayin’. He could take on all the women of the coven with no problem.
Moving on.
When Jenny is being told who her elements are, that was so incredibly accurate. I love how you do your research and then apply it to the story. It’s amazing. You seriously have a knack for this stuff.
I have a feeling Jenny could have some fun with teleportation if she really wanted to, especially since it scares the crap out of Giles when she does do it.
When I first saw the episode where Willow is off getting high on magic, I remember that I just wanted to kill her myself. I think having Jenny in the picture with her maternal feelings for Dawn, it kinda makes you hate Willow that much more. I’m not saying Willow is a bad character in anyway. It’s just the things she does in the later seasons that make you want to kill something, which is why she is such a good character.
The mini-showdown between Willow and Jenny was just epic. There is no other way to describe it. The way she drug her out the door without even having to touch her? Yeah. Jenny is badass.
SEFVBCFHGNXFB GAH. The mini-showdown and foreshadowing that was thrown in there was so nerve-wracking. Thank you for this chapter. I am SO excited to read the chapters that you have in store.
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I love this man and his guitar playing. He seriously can’t get any more amazing. Jenny is one lucky woman. Oh heck yes. There really should have been a whole episode of just Giles playing his guitar, and everyone swoons. Even the guys. ;)
When you had Jenny make breakfast for them, I was so hoping that she would have something to tell him. This is yet another thing I am excited for. Heee! I'm still trying to figure out where to fit this in (if it will end up fitting at all), but GAH I so agree that mini-Giles and Jennys would be a-frickin'-dorable. Mini tweed suits, and the little girls with dark pigtails. HEEEEEEEE.
The ‘got laid last night’ glow? Epic. Again, I love these two. That made me laugh harder than it should have. Bahaha, thanks!! Their banter is still my fave stuff to write.
As I mentioned on Twitter, and feel I must mention again, when you mention Miss Harkness, I either see Captain Jack Harkness in a dress OR wonder how long Miss Harkness has been keeping Jack in her back room. Y'know what's weird? I actually just found out (through the cunning use of Google) that apparently 'Agatha Harkness' is some sort of obscure Marvel Comics character. So now I'm trying to remember if I read somewhere that Miss Harkness' first name was actually Agatha in canon, or if I had made it up, or what. IDK. But she's a comic book character nonetheless apparently, LOL! Ah well.
I love how you do your research and then apply it to the story. It’s amazing. You seriously have a knack for this stuff. Thank you so much! As tedious as the research-y stuff can be, I find that a lot of times it ends up paying off. And I had fun researching the Wicca religion. I hope to use some more of that in future chapters. :D
I have a feeling Jenny could have some fun with teleportation if she really wanted to, especially since it scares the crap out of Giles when she does do it. LOL! She totally would do it at random times just to piss him off too. Because that's our darling Jenny, just loving to push those buttons. :D
And yeah, I totally get what you mean about Willow. She pissed me off for about 90% of season six. That's why I'm obnoxiously excited to get to the end of this season and write the big showdown.
The mini one I threw in because I was desperate to write any kind of Willow/Jenny-magicky fight, LOL. Glad you enjoyed that bit!!
Thank you again, so so much!! I'll be getting a start on the new chapter tonight! :D
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Also, I am really trying to remember what her name was too.. That just makes her even more epic because she is a Marvel Character of sorts. Great, now I am expecting her to Hulk out or start throwing webs at people. Maybe I should stop this now. XD
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