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Fic: Change of Heart Part II

Mar 13, 2008 00:06

Title: Change of Heart, Part II
Rating: NC17 (this part)
Pairing: Harry/Cedric
Warnings: some more angst, sexual content
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and friends did not come from my head.
Summary: Cedric is in the Order and Harry is not. They struggle with their relationship and the return of Voldemort.
Author’s Note: Part two of three... the final ( Read more... )

au fanfiction, fanfiction: novella, adult-rated fanfiction, author: rotaryphones, fanfiction: series

Comments 15

wirrrn March 13 2008, 06:14:43 UTC

Keen! Way to make Harry's frustration work *for* him for a change *g*

I also liked how Harry mentions Cho's betrayal in OOTP, movie-verse. Even if it was under Vertitas-thingamajig serum, it would still sting him, and not many other fics have mentioned it...

:resists urge to thwap Cedric upside head: *g*

rotaryphones March 13 2008, 11:55:25 UTC

Haha. Aren't they both such idiots? Even when they get things right...

As for the betrayal, I think it works movie-verse and canon. In the book it's Cho's friend who blabs, but Cho sticks by her, so I think he still considers it betrayal.

Thanks for reading!

wirrrn March 13 2008, 12:30:12 UTC

Hee! I hope it works out for them. They should start listening to their Y-Chromosomes, not their brains! *g*

It worked better in the movie being Cho who blabbed, even though under duress. It was my favourite part of the film apart from the Cedric/Harry shout out at the start and Gary Oldman's ad-libbed "Nice one, James!"

rotaryphones March 13 2008, 13:15:13 UTC

My favorite OOTP movie moment:

"I just get so angry sometimes, and I don't know why!"

It's called hormones, Harry.

anonymous March 14 2008, 19:25:50 UTC

Man, I think ced/harry are the hottest, most delectable couple i've read bout. Cedric....yummmm...I hope you update soon. I really like this story and dam but cedric is hot when he gets all hot and botherd..ugh i want to eat him.

enchantingelf March 14 2008, 19:38:24 UTC

I think ced/harry are the most hottest, yummiest couple ever. I really hope you up date soon, really like this fic. Dang but cedric is so hot when he gets all mad. I'd eat him anytime.

rotaryphones March 14 2008, 21:33:26 UTC

Haha! Cedric is having a nervous breakdown and all you can think about is eating him? ;)

And no problem on the double posting.

enchantingelf March 14 2008, 19:39:27 UTC

And yes i know i posted twice, just didn't log in the first time =/

callista_mythol March 14 2008, 23:45:15 UTC

*Slaps both upside the head* One day, they're going to get on the same wave-length. Until then they keep listening to their little heads and we all know how that works. And Hormones, never listen to those things because odds are Monsiuer Hormone is a raving lunatic!

I gotta say I didn't miss angry!harry after book five, and poor Cedric for bearing the brunt. Then again, poor Harry for having a lack in people skills meaning Cedric just.doesn't.get.it! Did he not notice how Harry ran straight for him after Dumbledore's great escape?

Lovely once again!

rotaryphones March 15 2008, 05:48:16 UTC

What they should be listening to is each other, because there's mostly a lot of miscommunication going on here. Cedric didn't realize Harry was even considering a relationship, and Harry didn't realize Cedric wasn't... if that makes sense...

Oh, and you might want to save yourself the effort and just knock their heads together! ;)