Muse Critque

[twonations]

• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right/wrong and why, and offer tips or pointers. Comments such as "my only critique is that you need to be around more", are extremely discouraged.
• No bashing. Please keep your critiques polite and constructive. That doesn't mean you

Comments

[hyperionated]

✿ musicontop
muse(s): hyperionated

✿ barbuddha
muse(s): jongkooks / nagatomo

[masuda]

Hey there~ I'm commenting from this journal because I'm lazy lazy and not going to log out (-_-;) Kame doesn't get to talk to Sayaka much, but I'm pretty sure that's got something to do with the age gap present there, and the fact that wow, that blast is pretty hard to keep up with sometimes! I'm sure that they'll get the opportunity to chat in the future. Don't give up on her! Personally I lovelovelove Happiness and it's the greatest thing to see anyone else with an interest in them!

[hyperionated]

From what we have seen of Kame, I really admire how he takes the time to really comment people and try to talk in the blast with the others. He's really sweet and I haven't come across many Kames nor do I know much about him, but yours definitely gets an A+ and a thumbs up from me! Don't give up on him, either! I really do hope Sayaka and Kame can chat personally one day, it might be fun to try and get over the whole age gap thing! She really admires him as an artist, actor, and senpai!

[yeolchan]

i don't have a ton to say at the moment or enough time to say it because my battery is dying but we ADORE baekhyun so much already. the reals seem to have such an odd chemistry and they're both so silly. we've had so much fun talking to him the two times they have. this is my first time in a long time playing a guy and so i'm feeling a little awkward at it! but seriously, it's just been a blast so far with you two. ♥

[hyperionated]

I will be completely honest, I was so, so, so nervous when you claimed as Chanyeol because I know how they are irl and I was afraid I wouldn't be able to meet expectations! But I can definitely say the same for your Chanyeol - we absolutely ADORE him. He's so easy to talk to and goes along with whatever nonsense Baekhyun comes up with so easily. Even though it is your first time in a long time playing a guy, I think you have him down pretty well! He's quirky, fun, and absolutely adorable and I am really looking forward to playing more with you in the future and really developing these two together. ♥

[yeolchan]

when baekhyun says that random stuff i just burst out laughing most of the time. i love it. he's definitely just as easy to talk to which is great to have not only in the muse of a bandmate but in the muse of a roommate. i'm looking forward to developing them, too, and growing these kids as we learn more about the reals and watch them grow. ;;

[yorterry]

Oh wow Yuto probably seems like a zombie obsessed freak to you by now. One day he will talk about something that isn’t ice cream or zombies, I promise! I don’t know anything about either of the reals so I can’t comment on characterization, but he really enjoyed talking to Sayaka that one time (and Jongkook too). It was really easy to talk to her and it felt really comfortable, which is rare for us since I get really nervous when it comes to one-on-one AIM conversations. He’s planning on poking her again soon because he would like to get to know her more, I’m sorry that it hasn’t happened yet!

[hyperionated]

But zombie obsessed freaks are obviously the best kind of people! Actually, I think it's really funny how they always manage to get back to the topic of ice cream - it's a definitely ice breaker that works very well in their favor. Sayaka actually really enjoys talking to Yuto as well and it was really refreshing how they managed to click so fast. Because she's so young, I was worried she would have a hard time getting to know people but Yuto really made her feel very comfortable. She actually plans on poking him again, too! I also apologize for not being able to do it sooner!

[hyperionated]

baekhyun doesn't seem at all interested in talking to anyone other than his bandmates. maybe it's just my muse in particular but i found him very standoffish and uninterested, while it's a completely different story watching him talk to the rest of his group.

[hyperionated]

This is what I was worried about to be completely honest. I won't try to make up any excuses on why he comes off that way, but he really does want to talk to everyone! Especially in the blast, but there are times where it is me who thinks he is coming off a little too ... obnoxious? Maybe? Since he's a rookie and people in the blast are his usually his sunbaes. Therefore I try to pull him back before anything negative really exploits from it. But with his bandmates, I guess it's easier for me to let him roam the jungles since they are all new and everything. In any case, I apologize if he seems standoffish and uninterested - it really isn't the case! He's definitely, definitely willing to talk among others and create friendships while he grows. But thank you for letting me know!

[yookwon]

It might be our personal experience with Baekhyun but I've found that he's really open to being friends with anyone. I can't tell you how much Yukwon appreciated quite a few of the out of the blue messages. They really cheered him up and actually spurred him out of a bit of a rut much faster than he was doing on his own. I don't know much about EXO so I can't really comment to his IC but in relation to his characterization for my muse he is very endearing. Yukwon really enjoys commenting and IMing with him and the random drop offs are because of his sometimes flaky mun and not a dislike of talking to Baekhyun! I hope you know that at least even if it's not been made clear to Baekhyun. I'm really glad they've commented so much today. It felt a bit like cementing some chemistry that Yukwon felt when Baekhyun first extended the hand of friendship.

[hyperionated]

So they don't know each other that well yet, but Baekhyun already feels like he has some God-given right to try and at least make Yukwon's day a bit better. I mean, the first time they spoke in the blast and Yukwon had said he was going through a quiet week, it then that Baekhyun was just like "wow he really needs someone right now" and took the initiative to be that person. Even if he all he has really done was sent Yukwon stupid videos of yellow minions singing about bananas or something along the lines of that. He's actually really fun to talk to with all that pushed aside, and I am really glad that they hit it off pretty well! Baekhyun's really hoping that their friendship will grow more and that he actually has more of a substantial reason to be there for Yukwon instead of just being that bystander who looks like he is trying to do a good deed.

Also, I can't really provide a great critic since we haven't really interacted much but so far Yukwon is an absolute joy and very endearing as well!

[makeuwet]

I really wish I had something useful to add here, but I just wanted to cheer you on with Sayaka. We haven't had a chance to talk one-on-one, but Koki's enjoyed the times he's seen her around the blast and commenting as well. He finds her really endearing, even though the agegap had him spinning for a minute haha.