Muse crit!

[twonations]

• No pointless comments. Telling someone you love them is cute, but not a critique. Tell them what they are doing right and why. I will delete threads that are just pointless. So no going "omg your muse compliments mine so well, they're perfect together.", or "My only critique is that you need to be around more."
• No bashing. Please keep your

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[byungari]

✿ sideqwest
muse(s): kyaoh

This would be me. ♡

[cryptologist]

How does one critique perfection? I think there are a lot of things about Byunghun the real and the muse that many people would not pick up on. I think the part about him that is done best is that he has a lot of sides and even though he is very open he is not stagnant in character. He continues to grow even if that is just what I notice when he is talking to Myungsoo.

[songsheet]

...Sigh. Byunghun, Byunghun. Woohyun loves the kid even if he wants to jack him up a lot of the time. He wanted to stand out to him and be the difficult hyung since everyone takes to him so easily and kind of in a sense, ~spoils~ him, but while Woo tries to have his own game - Byunghun beats him at it and ends up frustrating/confusing him easily. Which I think is a pretty good thing! Though, he was really :S ... :'( ... >:'( the other night with the Niel comment! Byunghun is a cute kid who has a really welcoming personality and it is pretty easy to become attached to him~ He has all the dynamics of a teen that I believe he tosses out fairly well at all the right moments

[dolcevie]

Oh my god. ♥ where do I even start? I'm so glad that these two got to meet and talk, both irl and muse-wise, and Jiyong loves having him to talk to often (he gets a lot of laughs out of it too). I'm not the most knowledgeable when it comes to Teen Top in general, but I love the way you portray L.Joe, because it just seems to genuine and real, and both of us enjoy talking to him so much. I'd say don't ever change, but L.Joe's constantly growing, so I guess I'd say - don't stray far from that path? haha ^^;

(Also, I haven't forgotten about the scenes I promised! I'm so so so sorry about not being able to get back to you on them ;;)

[howonton]

I will return T_T

[bomnomnom]

My muse and I pretty much share the opinion that this kid is adorable and I doubt he'll be able to shake that anytime soon :p