Fic (Big Bang) - Intimate Night

[twobees]

Title: Intimate Night
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Daesung/Seungri
Word count: 2745
Summary: In which Seungri is a drunk slut, and Daesung is annoyed.
Notes: This is set a year-ish before the episode of Intimate Note that Daesung and Seungri were on together. This isn't even remotely my OTP for this fandom, but after watching the episode, I was sort of

Comments

[numptysmeg]

Gah I love this so much ^^

I've been longing for a good DaeRi and here it is. Poor Daesung!
And so well characterised - Mature Daesung and bratty Seung Ri.. even 'Have you eaten?' !!

^^

[longleggedgit]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. Seungri is such a brat, haha--fun to write, but probably less fun to deal with in real life! Poor Daesung indeed.

[reallycorking]

REMEMBER HOW THIS FIC WAS SO EXTREMELY PERFECT :((((((

[longleggedgit]

Shhhhh you're silly ilu ♥

[reallycorking]

"Have you eaten," Seungri repeats, slowly, like Daesung is the difficult one here.

ARGHHHHHHH. In this fic you have just perfectly encapsulated how much of a shit Seungri is. LIKE. SERIOUSLY. DAESUNG BETTER GET SOME GOOD PAYBACK SOMEDAY :||

[longleggedgit]

hlkjfhae it was just really easy to write him being a total piece of shit because I've pretty much never seen him be anything else. And YEP DAESUNG EARNED A REALLY GOOD BJ.

[orenmanida]

this is amazing, seriously. i love that the porn is not just porn here, but really works as an effective means of characterizing daesung's relationship with seungri. i love how realistic this whole scenario is and how it's awkward/honest/hot all at once. the end was perfect, omg. and the best part, i can totally envision it happening. oblivious jerk seungri and forever patient daesung, lmao. i thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!! :)

[longleggedgit]

Thank you so much for the sweet feedback! I'm really pleased you thought it worked; it was a little intimidating to write because it's my first fic in the fandom! But yay, thanks again. :) ♥

[summanaro]

shit. I tried to comment once but then lj ate it or something idk.

but anyway, this. THIS. I loved this fic, it was amazing. you portrayed their relationship perfectly. seungri being selfish, daesung being overly caring yet having a lot of supressed anger. the characterization was really spot on. I was smiling while reading this because it's a rarepair and it's good!!

[longleggedgit]

Ahhh, thank you for taking the time to comment again! ♥

I'm so glad you liked it; you're so sweet! It was intimidating to write because it's my first fic in the fandom so I really appreciate the feedback. :)

[daesung_fanatic]

GDae is more rare than this but still it's close