Firefly, Wash/Zoe -- "A Whisper to the Living"

[agilebrit]

Title: A Whisper to the Living
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG-13 (default)
Length: Short story (a little over a thousand words)
Disclaimer: Joss is the genius behind these characters; I am but a lowly follower. I make no money from any of this, so please don't sue me. Some dialogue in this fic cribbed

Comments

[amor_remanet]

...Oh. Ow. ;____;

Rather than talk about how much this fic hurts the beautiful hurt, I'm just going to say that I was very receptive to the angst, loved it, and leave it at that. Nice job!

...her hand going to her neck where they stuck out like obscene flowers before she fell to the floor...
That line was sheer poetry.

[agilebrit]

Oh, thank you! I'm glad it had the intended effect.

Your icon fills me with glee every time I see it. :)

[bookishtype]

beautiful work! you have delivered one of the most pivotal scenes in the movie into something so poignant and so human.

wash fading away really tugged at me.... *saddened by the thought*

[agilebrit]

Thanks! Yeah, poor Zoe. Poor us, too. Joss is a big meanie.

[bookaddict43]

Poor Zoe dreaming of Wash being there at the battle, that just makes the whole thing more poignant and real. Wonderful work.

[agilebrit]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)