Comments | two_if_by_sea: PoT: tongue tied

two_if_by_sea

PoT: tongue tied

Jan 31, 2004 00:49

( tongue tied: momo/ryoma/tezuka. around 1200 words. the line momo crosses isn't the prime meridian. )

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two_if_by_sea January 31 2004, 17:33:31 UTC

But we all know that Momo likes Ryoma just BECAUSE he is a smartass bastard. That's like setting yourself up for heartbreak, man. Poor Momo. Ryoma's obviously his one true love; if only Ryoma would be, um, un-Ryoma like.

LIKE. I WILL MAKE YOU A TEZUKA/RYOMA FAN, DAMNIT.

dinghy February 3 2004, 11:55:57 UTC

WEEP. THIS. THIS IS SO THE MOMO/RYOMA IN MY HEAD, BESIDES POOR MOMO-CHAN DO NOT LOSE TO TEZUKA. >EEE

Yes. Love this madly, madly. It's so easy and nonchalant, their relationship.

AND OH YOU. <333333333

two_if_by_sea February 3 2004, 13:23:17 UTC

You know I only write Momo/Ryoma for you. *blows kiss*

Belated feedback shinra_lackey March 25 2004, 08:49:47 UTC

Sorry for random feedback form someone you don't know, but I wanted to tell you that I *heart* your fic. It's Momo angst when you think angst can't touch him with a ten foot pole, and it's Tezu/Ryoma without ever having them say a word to each other. It's great authors like you that are swaying me to the Tezuka/Ryoma side of the force.

Re: Belated feedback shinra_lackey March 25 2004, 08:51:38 UTC

Eek! Forgot to add, do you mind if I rec this to other people, I'm part of recsrainbow and I like to share.

- Green Eyes

two_if_by_sea March 25 2004, 16:12:10 UTC

MIND? I do not mind AT ALL. Go right ahead. *is very happy now*

Re: Belated feedback two_if_by_sea March 25 2004, 16:11:34 UTC

I believe everyone should angst Momo out. I mean, there's only so long you can keep writing him as the normal bouncy character he is. He is a normal teenager, after all. WHERE ARE HIS BOUTS OF DEPRESSION?

But I'm so glad you liked it. Especially if it makes you want to go to Tezuka/Ryoma. Dude. My life's mission, etc. <3 to you.

bookshop June 14 2005, 23:33:51 UTC

i'm so glad i found this fic. it's funny, i was just talking about your fics with a few of my friends over on kay_taylor's journal--we were talking about how much we enjoyed and missed your HP fics. i hadn't realised you'd moved over here, though i'd been seeing this lj name on my flist for a long time, and had been really intrigued by it. someone told me you wrote pot fic now. i've been scouring the pot fandom obsessively for ryoma/tezuka fic and i haven't been able to find any that are decent except for yours and hal's and a couple of other exceptions.

this is beautiful. ryoma's longing for tezuka is so sharp and pervasive, and momo's unwilling perceptiveness is fabulously written. gah. i don't like the momo/ryo ship--when it's like this, however, it just stings with clarity and brilliance. i love this fic.

and I have no doubt whatsoever that Tezuka, off in Frankfurt, thinks 10 is the loneliest number too.

*from tenipuri_recs* candipocky August 21 2005, 01:32:59 UTC

Ahhh....that last line made my legs go numb. -_-

poor momo. :(