There are so many things I love about this fic. I love the way you describe Fuji's voice, and Yukimura's, I love how Kirihara stays outside the door and never goes in - I love how he can't let go, but at the same time, can't take the step that will bring him closer, and the tension between being caught in the middle like that, that you write so, so well.
I love the way that you deal with Yukimura's illness, how you show that Sanada is a vice-captain, and always will be the vice-captain to Kirihara. And this part - "Kirihara remembers how Yukimura used to be able to hit a tennis ball so hard that it would cause Kirihara's racquet to fly right back up into his face. Remembers how Yukimura used to be able to run faster than any of them, used to be able to hit harder, used to be able to serve smoother, and play better than any of them." - took my breath away, and I still can't stop turning it over in my head, because that's what it *is*, that's what this means, and it's so tragic and heartbreaking
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. SAI, YOUR COMMENTS ARE THE BEST EVER.
Cathy, see, it has come to the point where people start randomly hallucinating tragedy in your fics. HMMM, I WONDER IF THERE IS ANY CONNECTION WITH WHAT YOU WRITE. :O
*loves you* You are so amazing in your comments. Whereas I am all, D00D FIC BLEW MY MIND. CANNOT THINK. when I am reviewing yours or like. Other good people.
And ahahah. First supplanter swears I killed Yukimura. Now you think I've killed Yuuta. Damnit, my reputation shadows over my actual fic. PEOPLE STOP TEMPTING ME or else the next time I really WILL kill Yukimura and Yuuta.
I love the way that you deal with Yukimura's illness, how you show that Sanada is a vice-captain, and always will be the vice-captain to Kirihara. And this part - "Kirihara remembers how Yukimura used to be able to hit a tennis ball so hard that it would cause Kirihara's racquet to fly right back up into his face. Remembers how Yukimura used to be able to run faster than any of them, used to be able to hit harder, used to be able to serve smoother, and play better than any of them." - took my breath away, and I still can't stop turning it over in my head, because that's what it *is*, that's what this means, and it's so tragic and heartbreaking ( ... )
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Cathy, see, it has come to the point where people start randomly hallucinating tragedy in your fics. HMMM, I WONDER IF THERE IS ANY CONNECTION WITH WHAT YOU WRITE. :O
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And ahahah. First supplanter swears I killed Yukimura. Now you think I've killed Yuuta. Damnit, my reputation shadows over my actual fic. PEOPLE STOP TEMPTING ME or else the next time I really WILL kill Yukimura and Yuuta.
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