PoT: bedside manner

Mar 27, 2004 21:28

For tongari. Although, when it comes down to it? It's more Kirihara/Yukimura than it is FujiKiri. I'm sorry ( Read more... )

prince of tennis, fic

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torrents of <333333333 your way tongari March 28 2004, 02:44:44 UTC
DUDE. I meant something short and silly and you write me this detailed beautiful portrait of my favourite boy all eloquently muddled up and conflicted instead. (my favourite characters are Kiri closely shadowed by Yukimura, so NO WRONG DONE HERE, NONE AT ALL, and if you want to do it again of your own accord BY ALL MEANS).

in Yagyuu's voice with that breathiness around it
I love the little things, like this, because they felt so casually slipped in and yet are the reason why this fic feels so fully fleshed out. I love how Kiri doesn't try to explain to himself why he's eavesdropping until the end. and the timing and turn of phrase AT the end.

even if Rikkai loses, they'll still go on to Nationals, or something
both Rikkai and Seigaku will, yes. Sanada was just being a dorky poo and promising Yukimura the Kantou Tournament trophy, is all. but I have no problems suspending reality for this lovely, none at all. thank you <3

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Re: ahahahaha, <33333333333 back two_if_by_sea March 28 2004, 08:08:06 UTC
Short and silly doesn't work with me, unless we are talking about boyband AU, in which case it is ALL TOO EASY. Although Rikkai is not in the boyband AU. Hm. We may have to change this.

Suddenly I was grasped with the urge to write Yukimura/Kirihara, so. And then I stared at your request and though, okay, so maybe I can just NUDGE Fuji in there somehow so no one will know the difference or something. Ahahahaha.

Am glad you liked it.

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Re: ahahahaha, <33333333333 back tongari March 28 2004, 11:15:47 UTC
oh the boyband AU! your Atobe Sengoku and Mizuki cracked me silly :)

nah, tis not your fault Kiri is too easily slashable, Rikkai fic generally makes me happy, and I'm bashfully head over heels with your writing anyway. will go hide now.

('Rikkai High School Jazz Band' was my answer to the Band Of Princes thing, and it is my answer again now.)

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two_if_by_sea March 28 2004, 14:23:26 UTC
Wait until we figure out how to actually write the scene where Mizuki picks up Sengoku except Sengoku mistakes the whole thing for a hitting on/flirting thing and uh. *laughs* It is not a very lucky way to begin.

I think I fall in love with schools as I write them, although stupidly enough Seigaku will always be my favorite. Poor Rikkai. I think the producers do not like them very much. THey might lose just because that fine line between Seigaku and Rikkai will be crossed because we're all biased. (ne, ne, ifwedonotwinTezukawillnevercomeback *GASP* DEATH! kind of thing).

<3333333333333333 WHY ARE YOU HIDING? I should be the one hiding. Too much praise, etc.

Ahahahaah. Yeah. I love your icon. Kirihara definitely plays sex. Whoops. Sax.

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tongari March 29 2004, 11:07:37 UTC
wait a minute, if Mizuki PICKS UP Sen then how can Mizuki NOT be hitting on / flirting with Sen? I have to see this.

//Seigaku will always be my favorite. Poor Rikkai.//
haha, Rikkai will always be my favourite, poor Seigaku. (sans Fuji.) I hope Sanada will win again though, because 1) he is a dork, but a dork in love, and b) unless Konomi introduces another super-school in the future, it might feel too much like 'we've won, now what?'.

um unless Sanada losing means the show turns around and starts detailing Rikkai clawing their way back to ultimate, final victory, which is unlikely no matter HOW popular they get. then again, Ore-sama in speedos? suddenly nothing is impossible.

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two_if_by_sea March 29 2004, 15:33:00 UTC
Ahahaha. He picks up Sengoku for the band, not for sex. It is a little different.

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