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Day 2 - Picking Up Strays (BtVS/ST: XI)

Aug 02, 2012 22:38

Title: Picking Up Strays
By: Polgara (melindoranightsilver@hotmail.com)
Fandom: BtVS/ST: XI
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own none of these characters.
Summary: It seemed that emergency rooms were the same no matter what century you were in. The same old antiseptic smell and white walls with a bunch of stuff laying around that you didn't even want ( Read more... )

author: polgara_5, fandom: star trek, !2012 august event

Comments 10

avamclean August 3 2012, 02:50:47 UTC

Day Two - Accepted!

The casualness of their interaction gives hint at how comfortable they are with one another. I like that he simply accepted her explanation and then offered to help her. It also opens the door to a sequel--subtle hint.

Of course now I'm curious as to how she'd react to Kirk.

polgara_5 August 6 2012, 01:55:28 UTC

*grins* I should hopefully get the sequel up tomorrow. Still not positive on the 'threequel'. Muse was a little quiet this weekend.

And on a side note, I need to find myself a good Star Trek icon...

mmooch August 3 2012, 03:04:34 UTC

Aww...Bones is such a softy!

polgara_5 August 6 2012, 01:56:01 UTC

I love men with that gruff exterior covering up that soft, mushy center. :D

coppersinger August 3 2012, 03:13:02 UTC

I love this! The dialogue, the ease between them - he's the doctor and she's the patient but obviously the lines aren't that clear. And yes, the ST-verse's magical healing tools would be very helpful for covering up super healing powers on non-major injuries - first time I've seen that.

This screams for sequel(s). ;p Buffy meeting Kirk, the rest of the crew... but especially Buffy, Bones and Kirk together. They'd be kind of unstoppable. (Not to mention really hot. *eg*)

*mwah*

polgara_5 August 6 2012, 02:06:06 UTC

lol, you know, Ava's been bugging me since I mentioned I was writing the first one and it didn't containt any smoochies that I had to write a second one. :D Second part is planned out and hopefully will get written tonight. And yes, Kirk will have a small role in it as well. :D

jerseyfabulous August 3 2012, 03:36:32 UTC

Love this. The interaction between the two feels so right. Pretty please might there be some more?

polgara_5 August 6 2012, 02:06:42 UTC

lol, yup, sequel will hopefully get written tonight and posted tomorrow. :D

Thanks!

kerrykhat August 5 2012, 02:43:31 UTC

I love these two so much, and you captured them perfectly. Great story! And I echo the call for more. :)

polgara_5 August 6 2012, 02:07:21 UTC

Thanks! I'll hopefully get the sequel up tomorrow. :D