[Fanfiction] Floriography: The Language of Flowers (4.2/?; America × England)

[twistedsheets10]

Title: Floriography: The Language of Flowers (4.2)
Disclaimer: Hetalia is not my creation.
Pairing: America × England
Rating: PG-13: SO MUCH FLUFF. *is embarrassed*
Author’s notes: America sulks, Canada tries to pacify him. Prussia and England get drunk together. ♥

Previous ficlets: 1: Dogwood; 2: Honeysuckle; 3. Roses and Irises; 4. The Truest

Comments

[lenisek]

I'm so excited to see where this is going! I like the choice of gifts that England gave to Canada, and I liked how you used Canada as a narrator (in all his fearful exasperation). And America's malicious aura made me lol.

Drunk!England and Drunk!Prussia are love. Always ♥

I think I caught one slight error here: the usually oblivious South Italy noticed things were not quite alright and clung to Germany’s sleeve the whole night (much to the German’s embarrassment) I think you meant North Italy.

[twistedsheets10]

Ahaha. Thank you. I've been wanting to write Canada for a while, and I thought he's be good as a narrator/POV person in a situation like this.

America in a bad mood is scary. He's emitting an aura like that when he was holding a chainsaw, but its even worse, and he's smiling pleasantly the whole time. ♥

Ahaha. I love those two getting drunk together! Moar drunken stuff next chapter!

Ah! Thanks for spotting that. Dammit, I always confuse these two! XD

[twistedsheets10]

Ahaha. Yes. *is sleepy when she wrote it*

Thanks for spotting that! *goes to correct it*

♥

[susan_chan]

lovely :)
and saddish a bit :)
but i enjoyed this part too <3
PrussiaxEngland conversation epic XD

[twistedsheets10]

Thank you! ♥

I know its a bit sad, but things will get happier later, I promise! XD

And there will be a bit more Prussia x England conversations later. ♥

[berseker]

Ouch. This is so sad and intense and bitter - I LOVED IT. I feel sorry for Canada, poor thing. The hug scene was gorgeous - I love how you balance the sad and bitter with the sweet moments, it adds so much depth to the story - and the gifts, awww. England giving hand-made gifts and America teasing him one time too many while Canada treasures it (and the toy soldiers, ouch, ENGLAND GIVE CANADA SOMETHING NICE TO MAKE UP FOR THIS!!).

Oh, and the DVDs scene was so INTENSE (My God that was so dumb, what kind of gift is that anyway? And I’m not even mentioning the I-pod he gave the queen!) and I’m glad it’s being addressed, because someone needs to solve this so I can have peace (and I’m glad it’s you, I love you so much).

[twistedsheets10]

Thank you. Yeah. Everyone's pretty bitter in this fic. And its all because of Englaaaand. XD

I think that is, in one way, why England and America are so very tsundere with each other: they get their 'love' thrown back to their faces so many times (though in the strips, we see America do this to England more often).

It's my personal canon England shares a happy, fond, trusting sibling relationship with Canada. Yeah, England never did give Canada a gift that equals that of the toy soldiers, but Canada is the one he trusts the most of his kids.

Haha. Yeah. I went WTF with the DVD thing. The iPod one to the Queen was OK, because there was some real thought to that gift. But the DVDs? I went, WAT.

[twistedsheets10]

Ahahah. Nono. It isn't. I'm sorry if I made an impression like that. :/

[twistedsheets10]

Ahahaha. Yeah. Well, Canada's afraid, but he's learned to deal. Canada has a lot of balls, really. XD