Young and In Love and Forever (DaiMao)

Jun 05, 2011 21:44

Author: Ginnie hibimaosuki
Genre: Romance. But more on fluff.
Rating: PG-13 for brief mentions of boykissing
Word count: over 3700 (CONGRATULATE ME)
Spoilers: None, really.
Disclaimers: I don't own Takumi-kun Series or TeniMyu. If I did, I'd be the luckiest girl in the world.

Notes: Eight and a half months after I first started it, I finally finished it! A ( Read more... )

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maomaochan June 5 2011, 17:23:46 UTC
So beautiful, absolutely beautiful!!!! You're an amazing writer, I 'awwwwed' at every moment! Definitely my favorite fic ever! XDDDD

For some reason, imagining Yuuta 'accidentally' knocking Mao towards Daisuke during rehearsals, had me giggling. Why do imagine him being that sneaky? lol

My favorite moment was after Mio incident and Daisuke getting Mao to smile again, in a very 'interesting' way ;)) I'm not sure what happened, but the way you wrote it was so sweet and precious, I can see Daisuke being the biggest support for Mao. And then imagining Daisuke hugging him after the incident and promising that he'll bring Mao's smile back, my heart almost stopped at how precious that scene would be. Daisuke definitely makes Mao smile the brightest, then he should be the one to bring it back ;D

And the last scene was perfect. That no matter how the future turns out, the two of them will always be together in some way or another and that they should focus on the now and continue to make memories together. Which is true, why worry about the future anyway? And that it is no way the ending of this story, it is still the beginning :DD
And Mao and Daisuke with a daughter...the cutest thing in the world! XD

Thank you for your hardwork! I really really loved it! *HUGS*

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hibimaosuki June 6 2011, 00:14:25 UTC
Thanks for reading!

I've always imagined Yun to be devious. Kinda like Fuji. Only worse because he actually exists and Fuji doesn't. =))

Haha. Mao didn't smile because of the scene they just filmed. He just smiled because he felt like it. Because Daisuke was smiling at him and he couldn't help but smile back. ^^; And yup, that did actually happen -- Daisuke was the biggest support for Mao after the Mio incident.

The ending wasn't originally supposed to be there :)) I'm glad I put it. It's one of my favorite parts of the story.

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