ARGH! You've got me interested and you've teased me by not letting me know if Dean is okay in the present. *shakes fist at you*
Mostly joking, I love this. This is how I always felt Lisa's thought process probably was. I never understood why people demonized her. She was a mother for God's sake! I would have despised her if she *hadn't* been furious with Dean for shoving Ben. And Dean never explained himself about anything, what was she supposed to think?
Perfect Bobby-voice too :) Love and miss my Bobby.*sniff*
I love it so far! Its off to a great start. What a great, in-depth look at Lisa and her character. :D Exactly what I wished for and more!
"Your boy's in love," a gravelly voice noted. "I know it's a secret affair and all, but word is she's a '69 Chevelle, and they're goin' steady. Don't much know what the kids'll look like. 'Specially with those racing stripes of hers."
HA! LOVE this line!
Really enjoying how you started at some point in the future with and then jumped back to after the phone call and how Lisa feels and is thinking about Dean and his job. Very nicely done.
Can't wait to read more! I'm excited to see Lisa and Dean interact in the next chapter. :)
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Mostly joking, I love this. This is how I always felt Lisa's thought process probably was. I never understood why people demonized her. She was a mother for God's sake! I would have despised her if she *hadn't* been furious with Dean for shoving Ben. And Dean never explained himself about anything, what was she supposed to think?
Perfect Bobby-voice too :) Love and miss my Bobby.*sniff*
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I love it so far! Its off to a great start. What a great, in-depth look at Lisa and her character. :D Exactly what I wished for and more!
"Your boy's in love," a gravelly voice noted. "I know it's a secret affair and all, but word is she's a '69 Chevelle, and they're goin' steady. Don't much know what the kids'll look like. 'Specially with those racing stripes of hers."
HA! LOVE this line!
Really enjoying how you started at some point in the future with and then jumped back to after the phone call and how Lisa feels and is thinking about Dean and his job. Very nicely done.
Can't wait to read more! I'm excited to see Lisa and Dean interact in the next chapter. :)
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