Boy

[twist_my_fate]

Boy

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[surfinrat]

i love it. lets make it into a movie! somehow. narrated?

[twist_my_fate]

No narration I don't think. I think it can be told by visuals. I'd prefer it that way if possible. Ya!

[surfinrat]

on the phone i like how you said "dribbles" instead of "runs down the side of his mouth" i think of dribble as being less than runs "however, only a little."
he is careful, so running down is right out.

dribble