Twispite: Justice is Blind

Apr 12, 2012 10:29

Title: Justice is Blind
Author: sos_sporkers
Fandom(s): The Twilight series
Rating: PG-13 for content (R for thematic elements)
Word Count: 2209
Inspiration: A Twilight fanfiction (The Dark Side of the Moon) in which Edward claims that the absolute worst thing he can do is turn Bella.
Warnings: Lots and lots of murder or implied murder, but nothing is graphic.
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character: other male, rating: pg-13, character: other female, warning: character death, character: edward cullen, book: twilight series general, length: 1000-5000, genre: horror/suspense, spitefic type: pov switch

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albion_witch April 13 2012, 13:39:12 UTC
So, Edward killed these people for being an under-aged alcoholic, living and presumably having sex with a woman before marriage, being an atheist/agnostic, and a prostitute?

Yes, truly they deserved the death sentence.

Sarcasm doesn't work so well over the internet.

Still, very creepy.

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sos_sporkers April 14 2012, 04:30:52 UTC
Well, the old man was killed for having a mental illness, which obviously meant he was a threat to society. The girl wasn't actually a prostitute. She was just a girl that made Edward lust for her. And, obviously, that was her fault. She tempted Edward into thinking these sinful thought, so therefore, she must be a bad person.

So, basically, Edward is ALWAYS more creepy than you think. ALWAYS.

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albion_witch April 14 2012, 14:40:57 UTC
Wow, that's actually worse.

Meyer may have not consciously written him to that extreme, though her writing has shown that she's cool with slut-shaming and ableism.

Still, he's barely developed beyond being incredibly hot and rich, so any view of him wouldn't be so inaccurate.

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mage_apprentice April 15 2012, 00:49:06 UTC
What mental illness did you characterize the old man with?

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sos_sporkers April 15 2012, 09:43:16 UTC
Well, I was aiming to make him severely socially dysfunctional, hence his freak-outs around people.

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mage_apprentice April 15 2012, 10:37:11 UTC
I sympathize. Writing characters with disorders you don't have or know nothing about can be tricky. I once tried writing about a character with narcolepsy. Really tricky to get done at times.

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