Spitefic: Influence

Apr 04, 2012 15:12


Title: Influence
Author: LaMadameRouge
Rating: PG
Word Count: 933
Inspiration: The resolution of the "conflict" in Breaking Dawn
Notes: I had to retcon the canon a little so this could work.  I missed writing Marcus' character more than I thought.

Summary: The level of influence the child holds over the group is alarming, and Marcus knows there can only ( Read more... )

character: the volturi, length: 500-1000, spitefic type: how it should have gone, spitefic type: canon twisting, spitefic type: rewrite, character: renesmee cullen, book: breaking dawn, spitefic type: pov switch

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lamadamerouge April 5 2012, 22:30:41 UTC
I left it like that because I am no good at writing action scenes and it would have detracted from the story, so thanks!

Considering the movies tend to be marginally better than the books... I hope so. I know the ending in the book was a huge basebreaker for the fans, and they can't make a film that's two hours of people posturing and talking at each other. The audience and critics will get bored...

So hopefully it'll be better.

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lamadamerouge April 6 2012, 15:03:59 UTC
I don't mind at all. I'm always looking for ways to improves, so I'm grateful for the advice.

I don't even know why you'd build something up and build something up only to have nothing happen. I know when I read Breaking Dawn, I had been up all night, reading and waiting for something to happen. It was a real disappointment and a waste of one of the last days of summer vacation for that year.

I hope she doesn't, but I know she's been fussy and demanding about things in the past... I'll just wait and see. Competent directors and writers know what you can and can't do in a movie to make it interesting, so I'll be interested in seeing their take on it. I want someone besides Irina to die, someone we're supposed to be emotionally attached to.

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