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Intruder

Jan 26, 2011 21:47

Title: Intruder
Author: quicksilvermad
Fandom(s): The Twilight Series
Rating: R
Word Count: 1196
Inspiration: New Moon: Chapter 23 - The Truth
Warnings: Violence, language, character death, nudity
Summary: Charlie deals with Edward's trespassing the way he should have. As a cop, father, and man with ties to the Quileute community.

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character: leah clearwater, character: edward cullen, spitefic type: death from above, book: new moon, length: 1000-5000, rating: r, character: bella swan, character: charlie swan, warning: violence

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quicksilvermad January 27 2011, 03:15:36 UTC

Thanks! I like teaming him and Leah. They both get the fuzzy end of the lollipop in these crummy books.

a_lovesuicide January 27 2011, 04:36:09 UTC

"Leah, you're naked."

Her smile widened. "Oh, I know," she said.

THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART.

Next to Charlie being completely bad ass, of course.

I'm invading your userpics and totally stealing a Charlie icon, btw.

kseenaa January 29 2011, 12:46:23 UTC

Your Charlie is kicking so much ass, gawd dammit, I love him! *cheers*

sylvacoer March 5 2011, 05:07:35 UTC

I DEMAND MORE OF THIS TEAM-UP. 8D

marienomad February 9 2012, 20:53:52 UTC

This was awesome. Charlie was more in the know which makes sense. I mean, would the tribe keep their sheriff in the dark when vampires are running around. Love the part where Leah asked Charlie for her own deputy badge while naked. Love it!