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[twintailmadb]

Hmmkay. Babbling about story for a moment or two.

So the original one-off involved a fox-person and a snake-person and that worked just fine for a one page short thing. However as I'm diving deeper into writing this thing I'm feeling "enhh" about the snakes.

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[thebattycakes]

So, I have no idea what this is for or about, or anything, but had thoughts.

When it comes to animals doing story type stuff snakes are a pain in the ass. Mostly because, they don't have hands. And, if you give them hands, well then, it's a lizard.

I think jackal is a good substitute for snake as far as unsavory goes, and if you wanted to keep the snake perhaps you could switch it to a side character so it isn't front and center giving you troubles?

IDK, that's just what my brain piped up to say after too little sleep.

[furikku]

You can always use snakedoodz later on something else? :D