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Shattered Affections Chapter 5

Dec 28, 2012 13:00

Title: Shattered Affections
Fandom: Transformers AU
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author: deathmustang, character: sideswipe, fic: shattered affections, author: ledishae, character: ratchet, character: sunstreaker, fanfiction

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deathmustang December 28 2012, 20:54:01 UTC

Thank you!^^ I wasn't so sure how it would turn out with me haveing a block.

cmdrtekk December 30 2012, 03:12:18 UTC

Good update. Good next step in the storyline.

Thank you for sharing.

deathmustang December 30 2012, 04:15:26 UTC

Your Welcome, I'm glad you liked it! ^^

ancara_iiii January 12 2013, 07:37:11 UTC

YAY you're back! :D

GREAT chapter! wow! Poor Ratchet he really needs some snuggles now :P

Can't wait for more!

deathmustang January 13 2013, 00:18:58 UTC

Thank you :D, sorry it took so long but I had a major block that wouldn't go away. I'm not sure when I'll update next with classes starting up again but I'll do my best!^^

byrnstar January 22 2013, 22:24:30 UTC

Nice chapter! Still having mixed feelings about this fic, which is good, I don't usually sqirm this much. :P On one hand it's good that Ratchet wants and loves the sparklet, and great to see the Twins finally getting their heads on straight...

...on the other, I still rather think it's too little, too late to ever make things right with Ratchet. No matter what, the relationship the Twins have with him is one based on slavery, possession and rape. Ratchet may heal, he may even forgive, but nothing the Twins can do will ever take back that abuse.

Hell. What happens if the sparkling turns out to be carrier-sparked, and the Twins have to grapple with the fact that their society dictates their child be sold to the highest bidder and used as breeding stock against their will?

deathmustang January 23 2013, 00:17:27 UTC

Thank you, and that is a very good question about the sparkling! I'll have to do my best to answer it whenever I get the chance to write and post again! Which is hard to say when that'll be at the moment.

zodiacsnake June 30 2014, 04:11:30 UTC

Dun dun duh!!!! wow I hope theres more of this i just havnt found it's so good and I want to see the Twins actully showing Ratch there love!! Well I'm off to look!!!