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Daydream

May 01, 2012 21:56

Title: Daydream
Author: sideslip_tf
Series/Verse: G1
Prompt: WoI #11 (Present Tense Only)
Rating: NC-17
Credit: fuzipenguin (thank you for encouraging me to at least give this a try)
A/N: I'm not completely happy with this but at least I tried. This is short because I really struggled with keeping everything in present tense only.

( Ratchet allows his processor to drift... )

rating: nc-17, author: sideslip, wrench of inspiration: fills, sex: sticky, fanfiction

Comments 2

fuzipenguin May 3 2012, 00:54:10 UTC

Yay! I'm so proud of you for trying (and *totally* suceeding) in this writing stle.
Very steamy... interested to see how their date went ;)

sideslip_tf May 3 2012, 02:58:42 UTC

Thank you for the encouragement. I have learned that this is not my style of writing! It was a good exercise though and my muse has been giving me more ideas. I didn't really think beyond this little scene but I am guessing that their date went just fine. (If I decide to write about it I will not use this particular style.)