Matter of Perspective - Part 5

[sideslip_tf]

Title: Matter of Perspective (Chapter 5 - Party)
Author: sideswipe_tf
Verse: G1
Rating: PG
Characters: Ratchet, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe
Warnings: none

Comments

[renegadewriter8]

awwww the ending was so lovely! 'He nearly cried when the medic said yes.' *mega squee*!

[sideslip_tf]

The twins are very charming. Sunstreaker can be a bit direct but Ratchet is okay with that. I don't recall reading any stories where Sunstreaker wants to paint a dignified portrait of Ratchet so he was pretty happy when Ratchet said he could.

[chimeradark]

Aww...Ratch said yes! I wonder how they are going to get him to smile for the portiat?

But this is so sweet, it's like a slow courting.

Love all around! XD

[sideslip_tf]

It is slow but sometimes that is the best approach. I think Ratchet will be amused by their antics and will have a hint of a smile just for them. They sure are fun to write.

[darkeyes_17]

Aw, I love it when they are considerate of their medic.

And Sunny asking Ratchet to do a portrait...for one second I thought of the fic by Aniay: Canvas, and I was like 'no, bad mind, bad!' because this pairing thing is most likely to be innocent.

I still admire your ability to keep it to your word limit.

[sideslip_tf]

Had to go read the fic you mentioned. Wow - that was HOT!

This portrait will be far more mundane. Sunstreaker really wants to paint something beautiful. As for innocent? The twins may be charming and Sunstreaker especially may be direct but they have a plan. They don't want just another frag.

[fuzipenguin]

lovely as always.
the last bit especially!

[sideslip_tf]

Hehe. I think under that tough exterior Sunstreaker is a real softie. Ratchet was charmed by that little smile of his.

[anavidbookworm]

For all of his social awkwardness Sunny really does know how to connect to bots when he wants to. There is just something raw and refreshing in that last line. It was beautiful.