Fic: The Way the World Ends

Apr 11, 2010 17:00

Title: The Way the World Ends [1/1]
Author: Unequivocally
Characters/Pairings: Finn/Quinn, Finn/Brittany (Puck/Rachel in the background)
Rating: Hard R for language and sexual situations
Word Count: 8,884
Spoilers: None
Summary: This is how it will always be: whole and undeniable. He knows it's not fair, but he never said he was perfect.
Disclaimer: Title is ( Read more... )

fanfiction, author: unequivocally, verse: the way we are

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unequivocally April 12 2010, 13:42:14 UTC
Ok first: I love you more. The end. Abed<3

I could fall all over myself over how awesome you are and how awesome this comment is, but you already know ALL of that because I tell you, frequently.

I love you so much it hurts me bb<3

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anonymous April 11 2010, 21:17:46 UTC
Puck mocks her the entire time she tugs on her fur-lined boots, shrugs into her heavy parka and wraps a scarf around her neck; until Barbie whines that she wants to go with Rachel, too, and after some grumbling of who’s fuckin’ kid are you, anyways, the three of them finally head out, leaving the apartment silent again.
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Angst isn't usually my cup of tea but you two write it so well and Finn/Quinn has always fascinated me. Well done and I look forward to the next installment!

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unequivocally April 12 2010, 13:43:56 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

The sequel will be a long while away, as I have to wait for TWWA to finish before I can finish it and post it, because the sequel will be spanning the events AFTER TWWA and I don't wanna spoil anything!

But thanks for reading, I'm so glad you liked it ♥

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becca_radcgg April 11 2010, 21:49:38 UTC
*sigh*

I agree with Molly's comments. I'm so proud of you for writing this, Shan. You've put your heart and soul into it and it really shows. The emotions are so real and tangible and you don't take the easy way out. You don't make everything okay because they love each other and nothing else matters because there are other things. And they do matter.

I love how you've written Brittany. I really love how you don't make excuses for them.

It's a very morose story you're telling here. And unfortunately sometimes real.

You write it real.

You have affected me with this piece. And affecting one person deeply is better than having a million "great story" comments! :)

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unequivocally April 12 2010, 13:56:13 UTC
That means so much bb coming from you, especially given your feelings on Quinn and Cheating!Finn in general, so that you were able to enjoy the fic in spite of no love for Quinn makes me feel awesome =)

Thank you for reading it a thousand times and helping me when I needed it, even if you only prompted me with a drabble to get the creative process going again!



Thanks so much =)

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fuzzy_paint April 11 2010, 21:56:08 UTC
and Finn nearly trips over himself on his way to answer it-”I got it, I got it!” His excitement because it's Quinn kills me a little.

”After all, I mean, she may get pregnant again, just breathing my air”-and it’s not until Quinn shoves him violently and snarls never again if my life depended on it that Finn feels like he can breathe again. I lol'd at the first part, because PUCK LOL, QUINN LOL. And then, oh god and then. It's so clear that Finn's still in love with Quinn. And despite that love, I wonder if he's ever really going to get over the whole Puck/Quinn thing.

“Hi, baby! I saw a rainbow! Thought of you! Call me!” This broke me. Brittany has no idea, absolutely none. Of course she doesn't, she's Brittany.

I was very confused b/c I was rooting for Brittany and Quinn to get the guy. But it really wasn't about getting the guy in the end. It's a torrid affair, whether or not it's TRUE LOVE or whatever. And it's not going to end pretty for anyone involved ( ... )

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unequivocally April 12 2010, 14:55:33 UTC
I'm so happy you liked it, really. I was really worried about this fic, to be honest! You comment makes me so happy<3

I do have such a soft spot for these two because it seems like they were never really given a chance and I'm just so rooting for these two in show, but I know my heart will be broken. Sigh.

Anyways. Ilu and Il this comment and thank you so much ♥

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fellowgleek April 11 2010, 21:57:16 UTC
this was beautifully written. You did a great job with the angst. The ending was great. I loved the PR in the background (lol). amazing job :D

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unequivocally April 14 2010, 14:09:37 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. =)

Of course, I am unable to write ANYTHING without adding PR to it, hahaha!<3

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