SHRIEK: Crimes of the Stars [1/1]

[twin_cores]

You said you would love me until the stars were tried for their crimes. Until every last one of them fell from the sky. I didn’t really know what you meant, so I just smiled and rested my head on your shoulder as you stared at the far away pinpricks of light. Later I wondered if you knew, if you had seen it coming. Because by the morning the only

Comments

[poprockbomber]

Holy fucking wow!
That was amazing.
I can't even describe it.
But I loved this so much.
Wow.
Totally saving this to my memories.
:)

Good job.

[mlkcartonmurder]

Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing this fic but I wasn't sure if anyone else would appreciate it.

[poprockbomber]

Not a problem.
I enjoyed reading it.

[turnitupbabyx]

This is absolutely amazing.
It just made my night.
I'm Ashley, by the way. =]

[mlkcartonmurder]

Thanks Ashley, I'm really glad you liked it.

[eletric_eyes]

this was amazing
like... well
you know how people write things that make no sense but they do
kind of like lyrics
they have a simple story behind them
well i make no sense but i know what i mean
i really liked it
:D

[mlkcartonmurder]

Yeah I know what you mean actually. This whole fic developed as an abstract idea. Things kept happening, and even I didn't know why until the end. I still don't entirely know everything. Like why Ryan and Patrick were chosed. I didn't write it, but in my head, Travis was chosen too.

[sugarcubeworld]

OMG WHEN DID YOU POST THIS.

You know I love it?
Because I do.

I think the concept mostly does it for me. ;) I'm glad to see this was posted, sorry about the lack of a beta. (lulz i spent 8 hrs in a hospital yesterday. :(((( )