Part VIII [ Beneath the Blue ]

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We'll see if Billy comes round. Right now it's up in the air; I haven't decided yet. But at least jake has an excellent support network in the Cullens, and I think that they'll all be really crazy happy about the baby and getting a new addition to the Cullens without someone having to die.

There's another few surprises in store, so stick around for those!

[avari_maethor]

I really like how you handle everyone's reactions. That is prolly my fave part.

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Aw, well thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying this fic!

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Naw, I knew it was you Shey; I followed the link from your LJ posts over on Twilight Slash to your fics a couple months back, and got hooked on them then. No I haven't been stalking you, but I notice when people post on that community. Maybe I'm a bit creepy thought... But if you want to comment on both sites, I'm game.

Aw, your saluting is fine, and it makes me happy. *grins like a moron* You know, it doesn't matter all that much to me if I don't get many people telling me that they like this fic or not, or if they read it. If I have a few dedicated readers and friends, like you, then I'm fine with it. I'm always pleasantly surprised when I log on and see that I've got a ton of review waiting for me in my inbox.

Holy shit, Poet's nearly got 200 reviews on FF.net! O_O That... I'm speechless.

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You know, hearing that from you means a lot. *grins* But still, I'm kind of surprised by it, because I never expected that I'd ever crack the triple digits with ANY of my stories, ever.

The only thing that would really make me fall off my couch or nearly kill me would be if I got review counts like you. That would be insane, in my humble opinoin. Or like Home, but that fic is in a league all its own.

[starlover_4u]

Sooo, I love hormonal preggers Jacob. Makes my life. Poor Jake. Being rejected by his father just because he's pregnant with a vampire's child. Billy was little harsh, but I can see where he's coming from. In a weird, twisted sort of way, he wants what's best for his son. He just has a bad way of showing it. Hmmm...wonder how's Bella gonna react? Just warning, if she says or does something that pisses me off, I'm pushing her off a cliff. Edward can do better than her anyway.

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*snorts* I'm all for pushing Bella off a cliff. I hate her beyond words, so I'd rather never have to write her into any of my stories except the Poison-verse ones. But I have to, because she's a character in them and it's a requirement. So I'm stuck with trying to get her out of the picture as quickly as I possibly can so I can focus on our boys.

Yeah, Billy can be an asshole. I was thinking about how he'd take it, and while I knew that he'd be okay but a little freaked out by the imprint, he'd definitely draw the line at kids. It's not that he doesn't want grandkids, it's just that he doesn't want them to have vampire blood. That, and he's worried about Jake.

[charlie_jae]

Wow, harsh much Dad. Though I can see him actually reacting that
way. He will regret those words later, I'm sure.

I think I had read this part before not sure if I had left a
comment or not. Just wanted to let you know Im still here
reading and loving it.

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Aw, well I'm glad to hear that you're reading it and loving it! ^ ^ Currently I'm working on another fic (this one for NaNo2009), but for this one I'm wondering about whether or not to let Charlie in on the whole thing... I actually have this pretty hilarious scene in my mind for him finding out.

There is fainting involved.

[charlie_jae]

That fainting scene sounds awesome. Especially with all that's been going on. Yeah I think he should be let in on it.

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I like Charlie, so I want to work him into the story. I may decide to write some non-Poet related smut involving him and the good doctor... Charlie needs some lovin' too.