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Round 1 // Challenge 5 - RESULTS

Oct 17, 2010 18:48

.... and here are the results!

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!results, !round: #1, !round one - challenge 5

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VOTE FEEDBACK needtakehave October 17 2010, 22:52:18 UTC

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Re: VOTE FEEDBACK frostbit_sky October 17 2010, 22:59:47 UTC

Yes please.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 18 2010, 05:13:55 UTC

Yours was my choice for best story, so you'll get my feedback in a private post. But I'll say here, as well, that I loved your story. First, I loved that you crossed Twilight with a contemporary, popular fandom. Go you! And I love a good songfic. I thought Kelly Clarkson's Breakaway was the perfect autobiographical ballad for Nessie.

I also liked Nessie's POV here. It was interesting and believable. And I thought the story was perfectly constructed, starting with the curtain parting and ending with the bow, giving us all the backstory in between.

Thanks for taking a chance with this crossover.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK frostbit_sky October 19 2010, 01:16:06 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so much!

I also voted for your story. I thought it was so creative and worked so well.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 19 2010, 07:26:41 UTC

Thank you!

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Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 18 2010, 05:20:14 UTC

I liked Alone Against the World very much. You did so much with your word count. I really felt for Quil, for what it was like to be a guy who felt deserted by his friends, who found it hard to express his hurt and confusion. And the final line says it all; Quil will no longer be alone.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK frostbit_sky October 19 2010, 01:17:58 UTC

I felt bad for Quil being ditched and can so understand his POV. Good for him for standing up to his former (for now) bffs.
Great title too.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 18 2010, 05:09:46 UTC

Wow! I'm flabbergasted! I'd love my feedback.

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Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 18 2010, 17:59:00 UTC

Thank you!

I've been obsessed with a possible connection between Thomas Wayne and Carlisle Cullen for a while, and I just wanted a reason to finally write it. I see similarities between the characters that could lead to both confusion and clarity for Bruce.

If you were going to read more, would you want more backstory or for the story to continue, or both?

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Re: VOTE FEEDBACK frostbit_sky October 19 2010, 01:18:50 UTC

ITA. I would love to see the story continue like that.

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 19 2010, 07:28:43 UTC

Thanks for the inspiration . . . this would be something I could do at my Cullen community (since I haven't done a darn thing there yet, hehe).

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK frostbit_sky October 20 2010, 03:52:55 UTC

What's the community?

I'd love to read more :)

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK mistressmarilyn October 21 2010, 07:43:32 UTC

It's Cullen_Fanfic. There's not much there yet . . . just my own stories.

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