Fic: Pale

[twiga13]

Well, here’s my first attempt at writing a fic :D

I wrote it to the song Pale by Within Temptation.

Plz tell my what you think about it, critics are very welcome ^-^

Hope you’ll like it!

Title: Pale

Pairing: hints of Asami/Aki

Warnings: none I guess…

Rating: PG 13 (I think so at least…)

Disclaimer: All characters belong to Yamane Ayano

Summary: Aki’s

Comments

[greatgaara40]

... kireiii.. I thinks this is a form of "prose poetry", neee?
I'm.. enchanted .. it's really beautifully written.

"I remember, you’re the reason… With you, I can pull through, I can stand it."
that's really touching.. your writing really brings back memories...
I remembered Aki-chan consumed with his thoughts, when he was still in FeiLong's captive. *goes to find the exact scene *
I really like the illustration of this scene.. Aki-chan really looked stunning in the Cheongsam FeiLong made him wear..
"I want Asami to help me.. I want to go home to Japan"

*bowing*.. thanks for sharing this Twiga-chan.. Kirei!

[twiga13]

^___^ I'm very happy that you think it's beautiful!
hmm, actually I don't know about different types of lyric, especially not in english ^.^

it's good to see that my writing triggered memories and emotions in you, I think that's very important.
yea, that scene was very touching~~ poor aki, hope you'll get home soon~~~

Thank you for reading and commenting gaara-san :)

[greatgaara40]

pleasure is mine :). Keep writing Twiga, Ganbatte!

PS : I'm Lily. Yoroushiku , nice 2 meet you V^_^V

[twiga13]

^-^ nice to meet you too Lily-san!

arigatou-gozaimasu, I'll try to carry on writing :D

[lilybenkyosuru]

Hi Hi Twiga-chan

I'm goofing around and thought to come to your homepage.. hehehe
and reading this again, again brings back some lovely memories... saankyu again nee.. and just now I was also thinking.. this first poetry prose of yours sort of raised a question neee.. Akihito's thoughts and hopes.. but now NT18 has brought to us our much needed confirmation/confession from both sides neee ^^ .. so.. if I may suggest, and I'm sure you've also thought about it, maybe you can sort of "answer" this first prose of yours.. that they are "honestly" starting something new, a beautiful relationship.. hehe.. sorry sorry I got carried away.. Well, hope your muse comes around nee..
Merry Christmas Twiga-chan, hope you'll have a wonderful holiday there neee.. Take care *one huge kuma Lily hug for Twiga-chan*

[twiga13]

good to see people are still interested in my stuff xD glad you still like it so much ^_^

yes, NT 18 really did bring confirmation about their feelings, and asami finally showed aki at least some of his feelings :)

actually, since I wrote this I've been thinking of writing an "answer" to this with asami's POV, more like to show his side of these happenings, but also to show a bit more of their future.

yesss, I'm waiting for my muse to come around too >.< I hope she'll visit me soon hehe :D

thanks for posting this comment, I really like to discuss such things with you, it's very helpful and inspiring :)
Merry Christmas to you too Lily-san, I hope you'll enjoy the holiday ^^ *a big bear hug for lily-san*