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Falling Down & Other Accidents: Part Three

Feb 19, 2010 08:14

( Falling Down & Other Accidents: Part Three )

gift, fic, winter 2010

Comments 35

mastaspammip February 19 2010, 17:07:38 UTC

thats the end... what happened??

mastaspammip February 20 2010, 08:38:21 UTC

If you scroll down to my reply to Ginny, I provide answers, or at least an explanation.

lasmke February 19 2010, 17:35:05 UTC

UGH. You're kidding, right?

That's it?

caren February 20 2010, 08:12:10 UTC

;)

lasmke February 20 2010, 08:34:59 UTC

Thank you.

anonymous February 19 2010, 19:08:33 UTC

Well what the hell? It was a good story but damn i didn't want it to end like that :o(

anonymous February 20 2010, 08:37:05 UTC

Thank you. Neither did I. Rather than have to repeat the whole sob story again, if you scroll down to my reply to Ginny, you will find your answers.

septentrion1970 February 19 2010, 19:25:23 UTC

You took me by surprise with that wedding band. Has Edward really moved on? Well, eight years are enough for that, even if the romantic in me regrets it. I pity Bella, who didn't try to make it work, who didn't try to ask Edward his version of what happened with Lauren (I hope she's not Edward's wife!), who didn't succeed in moving on.

I wouldn't mind reading a sequel. Have you written one, or will the story stop there?

septentrion1970 February 20 2010, 08:46:17 UTC

Once again, if you scroll down to my Reply to Ginny, you will find your answers there. So sorry. I feel like the worst person on earth right now. This fic was actually mentioned at the Gaz--not in a good way--and that kind of sucked. The first time anything I have written get a mention, and it's all negative.

I can't apologize enough, though. I couldn't really find any way to end it, while staying true to the vision in my head, that didn't feel horribly contrived to me. I am sure someone else could have, but I had this picture that was stuck in my mind. I am rambling, but I feel really awful.

Going to go cry now.

septentrion1970 February 20 2010, 09:33:44 UTC

Don't feel awful. The direction the story has taken was your vision, and you were right to stay true to it, whatever mention it gets elsewhere. And to come up with this in 9/10 days is quite good. It's true that it has an unfinished feeling, but now that I know you had to rewrite something from scratch in a short amount of time, I can see why that is.

Honestly, I think that Bella made her bed in this story, and she has to lie in it. She lied to Edward, telling him she felt the same and that they'd talk in the morning, and she feels resentful that he's moved on 8 years later? Honestly!

jilburfm February 20 2010, 13:32:24 UTC

I agree - Bella is the one who bolted. She had no claims on him whatsoever.

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anonymous February 19 2010, 19:35:17 UTC

Please tell me this will be contined into a full story!