well written!
Hey hazel,
Your most recent post was really well written and a beautiful piece of writing. The form of it was really attractive and you did a very good job conveying a mood and feeling to the reader. By the end of the "piece," I feel like I understood the feelings and thoughts that lead to the entry, especially since it's something I know we can all relate to as well. For something to feel so "well written" when you are "just" making a journal entry really impresses me! I bet your writing talent is really amazing!
Your most recent post was really well written and a beautiful piece of writing. The form of it was really attractive and you did a very good job conveying a mood and feeling to the reader. By the end of the "piece," I feel like I understood the feelings and thoughts that lead to the entry, especially since it's something I know we can all relate to as well. For something to feel so "well written" when you are "just" making a journal entry really impresses me! I bet your writing talent is really amazing!