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Pairings/Characters: Jack/Ianto, Rhiannon
Rating:   PG13
 Length: 2000- ish
 Pairing Type: M/M
Warnings: Canon character deaths - Owen, Tosh and Grey
A brief summary:  Set after the end of Series 2 - not CoE compliant

Help needed for: Punctuation and grammar please.