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Fic: Hostile Takeover 7/18

Mar 01, 2008 02:54

Shatterstar had maintained control over his demeanour throughout the entire invasion. As a warrior, he took great pride in his self control and the way he was able to refrain from allowing outside matters blind him in time of battle. However, that was no longer the case. For the first time in nearly two weeks he was beginning to unravel. They ( Read more... )

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traveling_storm March 1 2008, 14:33:35 UTC

Oh Bobby. ;____; Poor baby. And Shatty, man, dude I know things suck but taking it on Terry ain't gonna help, boyo.

Nice work! ^^ Next part? *puppy eyes*

twbasketcase March 1 2008, 17:12:49 UTC

D: I know! I feel horrible :( *DIES* Shatty is a little cranky, eh? But he's been thrust into this role and it's beginning to take a toll. He may be a bit of a bitch because of it, but he'll still do what he is told despite it all :D

Thank you so much, dear! I'm working on the next part this weekend :)

betterthanlegos March 1 2008, 15:00:41 UTC

YA UM someone commented before me and that is just uncool.

Anyways, great Star stuff. If you kill Rictor, I'll kill you. I think it's really realistic that he'd be acting in sucb a way, and he probably shouldn't act so mean to Siryn...but he totallly would so bee. If you kill Rictor, I'll kill you. AW, Star is just so confused and angry. Poor guy needs some Julio sexxorz and Julio not dead0rz right nao. If you kill Rictor, I'll kill you. I liked Dom's lines too...the few of them...god she is so cool.

AWWWW Roberto. God, he just breaks my freaking heart. If you kill Rictor, I'll kill you. I hope things get better for him, but I doubt they will :/ Siryn's really stepped up to her role here,
and it's awesome!

If you kill Rictor, I'll kill you.

Awesome chapter and update when you can :D

twbasketcase March 1 2008, 17:10:39 UTC

*DIES* I forgot all about your petty first comment rule. I'm so sorry, dear. XD

*DIES FOREVER* Rictor is going to get halp now! Domino found it 8D Besides, when have I ever killed Rictor? I would never do that, promise. :) I think the thing with Shatty is that he has periods of self control, and periods where he is overwhelmed. He is still able to maintain that control, but once he's overwhelmed he has a tendency to slip back into roles that are familiar, even if he's aware it's wrong. Really, he's just being cranky if anything XDDDDD But who can blame him, right? ;D And Domino will be making her appearance very soon. I have been DYING to be able to write her in this kind of a fic, so you can expect once she shows up for things to really heat up :D ( ... )