Prompt #68 - Running Away

Nov 27, 2007 22:07

Title: Scarred For Life 1/4 - Lost
Characters: Shatterstar and Rictor
Category: X-Verse/X-Force/X-Factor
Genre: Angst, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rated: R for sexual references, language, and violence
Disclaimer: I do not own any characters used in this story
Summary: Life on Earth is a complex thing and societal norm for a warrior born is something ( Read more... )

ste, prompt; ricstar100, fanfic

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betterthanlegos November 28 2007, 03:42:51 UTC
DDDDDDDDDDD:

Holy mother that was an excellent Star voice. I really don't know what to say cause you have me all speechless. But GAH. D: D: D:

Wowza that was damn good. INCREDIBLY SAD, but good. And very very realistic. Can't wait for the next part :)

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twbasketcase November 28 2007, 03:56:25 UTC
:(

Really!? Glad you think so! I will be going into even more of Star -- with the next two parts especially. He just really doesn't deal with things he can't control very well, and its going to fuck with his head a lot. He'll work it out eventually, but it'll just take him a while to get there. I promise :)

I'm glad you think its realistic. At first I was just gonna use the running away for Rictor because its EASY, but I dunno...I just wanted to try something different I guess. So I'm happy you think it works.

Thanks for reading, even if it was one big fat D:

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betterthanlegos November 28 2007, 04:00:41 UTC
Well, as long as he gets there. I hope Julio doesn't get with Rahne while he waits for Star in your little universe D:

It does I promise.

D: As long as I don't have to retcon it, you're good.

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twbasketcase November 28 2007, 04:08:15 UTC
He will, I can at least be nice enough and assure you of that XD Julio will be dealing with some...crap...too, but I'm doing something with him kinda more based around Messiah CompleX to tell you the truth. You'll see, and he'll keep his nose out of trouble for once

Hee, I'm glad :)

*DIES* I have decided that you retconning my fics should not have to be necessary XDDDDD I will not kill anyone, I promise. To tell you the truth, I'll bet you'll be rather thrown off by the last prompt I use for this XD

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valoofle November 28 2007, 06:55:54 UTC
Heee, I love characterization stories! :P ( ... )

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twbasketcase November 28 2007, 18:21:22 UTC
I know! I do too, they are my favourite kind!

Star's homeworld is VERY very mysterious and complex. There are only five or so Marvel characters (out of THOUSANDS) that have ties to this place, and in order to effectively understand it you seriously have to do soooo much research on all FIVE of them and piece it together. Its all in chunks and its near impossible to understand it without tying all of the Mojoworlder's pasts/lives together. Everything about Mojoworld is screwy, and its taken me many months to even have this much knowledge of it! So what I tried to do was use everything I do know and put it into a story so not to make Shatty's origin so difficult to understand. If you feel that you've grown knowledge about it just by reading this, I AM GLAD! That was my intention! :D ( ... )

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michiru42 February 15 2009, 05:24:39 UTC
@_@ Well SCREW YOU, Star!

No, I don't mean that. Actually, I think the characterization is spot on, and I love how you're reversing their roles and yet keeping it so in character.

But I feel so bad for Julio. *huggles Julio*

Excuse me, I'm going to go read the next part, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't hope Star didn't get beaten up at some point!

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twbasketcase February 16 2009, 02:25:16 UTC
Ahahah, yeah he kinda does come off as a bit of an ass, doesn't he? But a 'Star not struggling with coming to grips with his emotions is just not a 'Star at all to me, so I had to. XD

But yes, poor Julio needs a hug. :(

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