Holy cow, this was amazing. Every person in this story was in-character and written beautifully. Finstock was hilarious and I felt like the entire conversation between him and Scott could have easily been put directly into the show and fit perfectly. Allison's interactions with Isaac, even though brief, were exactly the way I would expect to see them in the show. This entire fic was just incredible!
Ohhhh, my goodness, what an amazing surprise - I never expected an epic like this! ♥
There were so many wonderful bits, and as the commenter above me said, the Finstock stuff was SO MUCH FUN. I adored the idea that Finstock would have decided the team's success was due to magic, and that Allison was the culprit. I'm not much for AUs, but I'd have a lot of fun with that element added for real. Though somehow it seems Lydia would be a more likely candidate... AHEM, sorry getting off track.
His reaction to finding out the truth was fantastic - and I want Finstock/Melissa so much in canon now. Or mean, even more than I did before, lol.
I also loved: 1) Scott and Allison's halting yet sincere attempts to reconcile, 2) Allison and Lydia at the game, 3) Issac and Danny, particularly their banter, 4) how much the Beacon Hills adults figured in to the story, and 5) the mystery element - PLOT, YAY! It's really hard to do plot in an exchange situation, but you really came through.
I like how you dealt with Allison's issues in this, a look at her thoughts about what happened. And Finstock was hilarious. I loved how he was so blase about the supernatural stuff. Anything for the lacrosse win!
Thank you :) All of the characters have done bad things, so I think whether or when they let Allison back depends on how they rank her decisions against their own.
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There were so many wonderful bits, and as the commenter above me said, the Finstock stuff was SO MUCH FUN. I adored the idea that Finstock would have decided the team's success was due to magic, and that Allison was the culprit. I'm not much for AUs, but I'd have a lot of fun with that element added for real. Though somehow it seems Lydia would be a more likely candidate... AHEM, sorry getting off track.
His reaction to finding out the truth was fantastic - and I want Finstock/Melissa so much in canon now. Or mean, even more than I did before, lol.
I also loved: 1) Scott and Allison's halting yet sincere attempts to reconcile, 2) Allison and Lydia at the game, 3) Issac and Danny, particularly their banter, 4) how much the Beacon Hills adults figured in to the story, and 5) the mystery element - PLOT, YAY! It's really hard to do plot in an exchange situation, but you really came through.
Thanks for writing this for me! You rock. ♥
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