Lost And Found

[harkness_101]

Pairing: 10/Jack
Challenge: Home
Rating: 12
Warnings: Bit of swearing, heavy mentions of suicide and graphic illness.
Spoilers: None!

The Doctor stood there. His arms lying limply by his side. His hair had seemingly lost all life. His mouth was slightly open. His eyes were wide with shock, confusion and uttermost grief.

This couldn’t be… No. Not.

Comments

[harkness_101]

Thanks for the comment! I've re read it and changed the errors. (Was a bit too excited about posting I suppose)

xx

[vail_kagami]

I'd really advice you to look it over again because there is some puntuation missing and random letters and words are strewn all over the story.
Apart from that it's really lovely. I feel terribly bad for the Doctor - destroying the TARDIS is one thing I never had the heart to do. I killed his friends in my stories, destroyed planets but I never touched the TARDIS. It'd break my heart.
Jack was sweet here, and I liked James.

[harkness_101]

I've always stayed clear from it until this... When it said 'Home' it was just too much to resist although I reckon it could've been more angsty.

Thanks for commenting =] xx

[shinodabear]

I really don't much care to think about the Doctor losing the TARDIS in any sort of permanent fashion. Quite sad.

I really liked this line: And I can’t be in love with a dead man because it just won’t work. I won’t work.

Nice fic. Like the other commenters before me mentioned, just give it a quick look through. Minor formatting issues, but nothing major.

[harkness_101]

Also one of my favorite lines. All errors have been amended (well that I can see)

Thank you for commenting xx

[javana12]

awwwwww! That's so sad!
And so sweet at the same time!

Loved the last line - it was a perfect ending!

*hugs*

[harkness_101]

Thaank you! So glad you liked it.

Do try my best =]

Thanks for commenting xx

[obeythepenguin]

Loved it, very upsetting, but a lovely ending.