Comments | tw_dw_slashfest: One Way Mirror [Ten/Ten.5] (Sadism & Masochism)

vail_kagami in tw_dw_slashfest

One Way Mirror [Ten/Ten.5] (Sadism & Masochism)

Mar 23, 2009 22:58

Pairing: Ten/Ten.5
Challenge: sadism and masochism
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slightly dark
Spoilers: Journey's End
Summary: Their relationship is an abusive one, but it's hard to tell who's abusing who.

You are the same but you’re not. Two heats and one heart. An endless life and a short one. Guilt and anger, begging for pain and giving it. Centuries of ( Read more... )

challenge: sadism and masochism, characters: half-human!ten, characters: tenth doctor

Comments 8

shinodabear March 24 2009, 00:27:31 UTC

This is the sort of piece that begs to be read aloud. The words flow beautifully. (And I am such a sucker for second person pov.)

vail_kagami March 24 2009, 00:43:40 UTC

To be honest, I wouldn't have written this without your Koschei/Theta drabble. I had the idea a bit ago, but never knew how to start. The second person pov gave me the inspiration I needed.
So, thanks a lot! :P

shinodabear March 24 2009, 01:05:45 UTC

I'm honored! You are quite welcome. :)

hungryhippo11 March 24 2009, 04:49:24 UTC

Wow, that's excellent! Was half-expecting something more graphic, but was pleasantly surprised. Love the whole 'you know that I know that you know' dynamic between them, it fits so-very perfectly :)

vail_kagami March 24 2009, 21:56:17 UTC

I leave the graphic Ten/HalfTen stories to authors better than me. I'm glad you liked it like this.

iamjabberwok March 24 2009, 21:29:51 UTC

There is something weird and a bit disturbing in the whole 10.5 situation and you capture that beautifully in this fic. I really like the idea of 10.5 punishing 10 for crimes both of them remember commiting.

vail_kagami March 24 2009, 21:54:36 UTC

Yeah, it's weird with them. I wasn't happy about the entire "Let's clone the Doctor!" thing, but it gives us material for some interesting fics.
Thanks for reading!

rrr_nightingale February 27 2011, 21:51:55 UTC

Oh, I like this problem very much, as you know!) Wonderful fic!
The idea that the Doctor hates his clone like he hates himself is stunning. Oh yes, this is very probable - and frightening at the same time. For some reason it hasn't come to my mind, and now I start to think that it is for the better that the Doctor left him in the parallel universe...