Comments | tw_dw_slashfest: No More, Jack/John, PG-13 (Pride)

shinodabear in tw_dw_slashfest

No More, Jack/John, PG-13 (Pride)

Oct 14, 2008 21:50

Modly mod, may I have a Cpt. John Hart tag, please?

Pairing: Jack/John Hart
Challenge: 22 Pride
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Confusing pronouns (see Note). I think that's all. Oh, pre-series and a whole bunch of let's-make-up-an-Agency.
Spoilers: None, but general for "Kiss Kiss Bang Bang," I guess, for some CJH backstory.
Note: Captain John Hart is ( Read more... )

characters: jack harkness, characters: john hart, challenge: pride

Comments 5

teastainedbird October 15 2008, 13:56:32 UTC

Loved it! There's not enough TimeAgent!Jack fics out there.
I really liked seing Jack going from complete trust in his superiors to the realisation that everybody knows and no one will help.
And the Jack/John interaction.
Very nicely done! This is an instant bookmark, it is!

shinodabear October 15 2008, 19:59:18 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad to hear this worked.

csg1 October 15 2008, 21:03:00 UTC

I really like this. I love how suddenly just John touching him or talking to him makes him feel ill. You've managed to capture Jack's horror and disbelief at the situation so well in such a short piece.

Another brilliant fic! :)

shinodabear October 15 2008, 21:57:09 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it worked with the length. I seem to only have time for ficlets now, but I don't want to just write nad cut off at a certain point. I still like everything to work together in a neat little fic-package.

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shinodabear October 20 2008, 20:15:23 UTC

:) Thank you.

Everyone knowing is something I can definitely see the Agency doing. It also would explain why Jack would leave them in the first place. I'm glad you liked this. Thank you.