[Fic] Stay

Mar 21, 2010 21:32

Title: Stay
Author: analine
Pairing: Nataraja/Pasupata
Warnings: None, worksafe
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1800
Summary: Nataraja decides to get to the bottom of Pasupata's secrets.

Notes: HAPPY BIRTHDAY fencer_x~! It seems that a few of us (<3) had the same idea here, but I figured another birthday fic couldn't hurt, right? :D I actually feel like it's a ( Read more... )

natarajaxpasupata, maharaja mode, analineblue, fanfic

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analineblue March 23 2010, 19:06:25 UTC
I'm glad you liked the Nataraja POV. I wanted to try something new, so I'm glad you thought it worked. ^_~

As for the kiss, you know... I actually had a hard time getting them to that point? I knew I wanted it to happen, but I kept getting stuck trying to figure out how exactly to get them there, and so... In the end it turned out happening a little abruptly? But for some reason it felt right to me, so... I'm glad you liked it too. :D

That's a really interesting idea about Tuti closing his eyes too. For some reason I hadn't made that connection at all to Pasupata being blind, but that's a good point. *_* It could definitely be a character thing here... I mean, I think generally if you know someone is blind, you tend to sort of...look at them less? At least you would probably unconsciously avoid direct eye contact. Hmmmmm. Definitely something to think about. *_*

I like the idea of Pasupata being completely confident on some levels and then completely insecure on others. I feel like lying to Nataraja for so long would sort of have that effect? Kind of a double-life sort of idea...

Anyway. :D Thank you. I really appreciate the comment, and I'm really happy you liked it. <3

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